Reviews for Make No Mistake
monsterpippi chapter 10 . 9/26/2018
I'm proud to say that I pulled an all nighter for this, no regrets, I'd love to see a continuation ofc.

It's really hard to say what I loved the most, it could be Sanjis character and his background story, how his issues manifested themselves through the traumas he went through and how it's rather real. The story in general kept me glued to the screen through the whole night, despite having to actually needed some sleep, that really can be taken as compliment to the lovely writers.
One critique I would have is that the Franky/Robin story line doesn't really catch on, like it feels too separate from the rest of the group.
(Ps: I really loved the criticism, of how educational institutions are run as businesses and content is often based on affiliation rather than qualification etc., that you sneaked in!)

Thank you for the already existing 200k words, it was absolutely great!
- Katja
SnowCrystalZS chapter 1 . 4/28/2018
Its pity
No complete :'(
I like it
Guest chapter 10 . 2/5/2018
I loved this chapter
Could u make it a LuNa?
Subaru's dreams chapter 10 . 1/27/2018
Will you go on with that? It's really cool and I want to read more of it.
yontouryuu chapter 1 . 11/11/2017
This story is so awesome that, the first time I read it, I binge-read the entire thing in one night. Now, I'm re-reading it. Especially for college students like me, these guys are so relatable: Sanji slowly losing it and pushing away all his friends, the fear of accepting a friend who's into some really messed-up shit, and supporting each other all the way to the end no matter what. Like, dude, the nakama feels are so poignant. You're the only author I know of whose work actually does a satisfying and meaningful translation of the character traits into the modern world.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/25/2017
I love this story. Thana you. :)
Abegaelle chapter 10 . 6/24/2017
I don't know why I didn't hear about this story sooner but I just binge read it in 2 days and wanted to say it's really amazing and a lot of fun to read :)
12fredofrogs chapter 2 . 1/24/2017
Pfft! The idea that Sanji has an accent and no-one recognises it is now my favourite headcanon.
vinsmokesanji chapter 1 . 12/13/2016
now I'm just imagining them in college and Sanji visiting Luffy everyday to cook for him with his boyfriend Zoro... omg XDDDDDD
Megenehason ZOSAN-LAWLU LOVER chapter 2 . 11/27/2016
Gosh,Its like 1:33 in the morning right now and I rlly need to sleep but I just CAN'T stop reading this story made by heaven I even can't believe that I even stopped to review for this I just want to go on to the next chapter already! I'm loving ur story right now that's a fact there's so much to read that has me cracking up then wincing from moments tht a particular character! stupid ly does something or say something stupid character says somthing he shouldnt have(Zoro)and then moments where I wonder who's the narrator then notice its changed I love those,reading from different perspective's just makes it more interesting u should do Luffy's too if u haven't already tho u switch from person from person in the story anyway,hey is this Zosan or what?I'm not sure anymore I initially came and read this story for it but go to caught up in this story's drama hahah it feels like I'm actually watching a movie right now just 10x better. you're the kinda authors I like best, who can actually write a story I could visualize and understand I'm very grateful u took time out of ur daily life to write this "thumbs up" (anyway back to the story)
Joe Probus chapter 10 . 9/1/2016
I want to say, I started this fanfic over a year ago, March of 2015. I was going through a really rough time and was really hating life. But this fanfic was so much fun and brought a smile to my face every day as I read it over a month. I remember taking pictures of the computer screen so I could read it at work when I didn't have data.
Now my life is back on track and I'm in a really good place. I only wish I could finish this fanfic that got me through the toughest time in my life. I understand that maybe you don't want to finish it, and that's fine. But if you ever do want to start writing again, I'll continue to check fanfic every week hoping that you've updated.
Thanks you guys! Have a great one.
sweetkakes35 chapter 10 . 4/1/2016
I love this story! And to be honest, when I started it I didn't think I would. I'm glad I gave it a try :D Can't wait for the next chapter! I have literally been waiting for Zoro and Sanji to sort their shit out since the first bathroom kiss and this totally calmed me down some :)
Sarcasticles chapter 1 . 2/2/2016
Interesting start. Im one chapter in and it's already one of the best real life AUs I've seen, so kudos. Looking forward to more, especially Robins bit with school politics and whatever it is Luffy does for his money. And Brook too, if he was the one playing the piano. It's my guess he owns the house and rents it for super cheap because Brook is awesome like that.
Chrissie chapter 10 . 1/26/2016
English is not my native language, so, I apologize for any cringe worthy mistake!

I read this fic in about 4 days (I'm a slow reader), and... I don't really know where to start. I wish this had more favs and reviews, because it is one of those very few "this could be a book. This could be a freaking awesome book. Why aren't those people getting paid for such a professional work" fics that I'll put in my favorites and in some months I'll feel this physical need to read it all over again in a even slower pace and I just hiasuihdasofavbsiva, would like to thank the two of you for publishing this here!

It is amazingly well written, in the begging I was wondering if the pacing was too slow, but now that I'm in chapter 10 I understand. I have no words. I loved your portray of Sanji, especially. He is so fucking deep and interesting, you made Oda look bad in my eyes, hahaha (kidding, I know his work has a different objective and all). And to be very honest I was surprised by how Zoro was handled? He is usually a very simple character in fanfiction that I don't really get but It's like you somehow injected more life in him, he has complex reactions and compelling dialogues, this may be my favorite Zoro by far. And their relationship progressed so beautifully and so udsgauihduoashdas. I've spent those last days just daydreaming about this universe. You've done a really good story, I'm very happy of having found it! So, again, thank you for posting this here! I hope I can read a continuation someday (uuuhhh soon!), but take your take, I'll wait, I'll wait forever! When a new chapter comes I'll be beaming!

Uuurrgh, I would like to say more about my reactions to certain parts but my brain is saying nope at the moment. And I think the links in your profile that are not related are not working... I think? I heard about this fic in a tumblr? One with very pretty drawings? Well! That's it, I'm sorry for the awkward review!
DaniCaridwen chapter 10 . 11/3/2015
Man, I can't wait to see the next chapter (if it's going to be uploaded, almost 5 months since it was updated?). But I do hope you didn't abandon this fic, because its GOLD. I'd say is the best I've read so far, the characters have interesting relationships, and I repeat myself to say they're totally on point. Plus, you got me into ZoSan!
I'm so sad for Franky, discovering it like that... :( I want to see what happens next! They're so cute together, I really enjoyed this chapter's scene ;D
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