If anyone wants to play a true spiritual successor to "Dungeon Keeper 2" I recommend "War for the Overworld" on Steam.

Well, it was entertaining, also can't believe that someone know .Hack/Infection, I wonder if Princess Relena liked the plot, or mainly the 'dress' of Blackrose

I would like either a link to this story with the lemons still in it; or just a copy of the lemons please! Loving the story otherwise!

Reload the original plz miss all the lemon goodness

i do love this fic but the only thing that piss me off is that he becomes General Ranma... it well kills me to read that happened when i first read this. now i feel like banging my head against the wall when i read this.

Intresting story and amusing to read though.

That's... unreadable. Make some space in that text, man !

Amazing story and great job on the Ranma non attempt which was successful in taking over the world!

TheoneButcher
all i can is thank you. I love dungeon keeper but i find well find good story really hard.

Dungeon Keeper Ami is the ultimate awesome. I actually found your story looking for a specific fanfiction of DKA, where Cathy finds porn on the mercury computer.

Your Quality isn't really high and your Powers poorly thought out, but you make up for it with funny references and a devil may care attitude. You are just having fun and I can respect that.

Still Dungeon Keeper Ami is one of the very best fanfictions and not to forget real life Science combined with well thought out magic. Ami excels by thinking in reasonable ways that apply to real life, and calm analysis. If she invents something she does it "on-screen" and the reader gets to know exactly how it works.

Thank you for progressing to double spacing! Thank you thank you thank you. Now the tears in my eyes are from joy rather than the pain of staring so hard and narrowing them.

very nice

what about the lemons,

do you have a uncensored version of this fic uploaded anywere?

holy wall of text batman

Great fic, the ending was a bit so-so but overall it was good. Could use a bit more effort, more "story" and less "game" if you catch my drift, but... Meh.

Oh, and regarding that last Omake; Horny sends his regards and thanks you for finally finding him a decent enemy with lots of things that go "squish" with a satisfying amount of gore and the odd work-out (a real challenge would probably be too much to hope for, though those "Angels" were quite fun... Those he could fight physically, that is).