Reviews for Ideas, One-Shots, and Plot Bunnies
Tokitakun chapter 17 . 7/17
As others have said, I really hope you turn this into a full story one day.
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 23 . 4/17
i have been toying with my own artificer harry fic idea for a while now. in my version harry does not simply enchant items, he has a gift that allows him to go beyond simple enchantments and instead create true artifacts and relics. in other words, while an enchanter could make a decent magic sword? harry could create a Legendary magic sword.

but as with all magic its a learning curve. he creates many artifacts over the years. some successful, others... less so.

its been an idea of mine for a while now. and it borrows some elements from the Webcomic "Girl Genius" namely the "Spark".

in the webcomic it primarily attributes the "Spark" as the gift that makes Mad Scientists so inventive. in my fic i expand it a bit and apply it to magicals as well. in fact in mundanes the spark has fizzled almost completely out, leaving only magicals being born with it.

harry is one such spark, his "Focus" is artificing, Sub-set: Combat. the weasley twins are also sparks, with a focus on spellcrafting, sub-set: Pranking.

each spark has a focus that their gift leans towards. this focus can also have a sub focus that narrows their inventive drive even more. it doesn't prevent said spark from working outside their focus, it simply means they will have an easier time working within their chosen field.

kind of like elemental affinities in Naruto. having an elemental alignment does not stop you from learning other elements, it simply means you will have an easier time mastering one element over the others.

artificers are unique however, in that they weave strings of raw magic together to create their artifact enchantments, they dont rely on premade spells. this makes each artifact unique. however they can create duplicates of an artifact they have made previously, they merely dislike doing so, as they are essentially artists. and no artist likes to make copies of their masterpiece.
Toffeecat15 chapter 12 . 1/19
so you're saying Harry, being a Wizard, came from the Moon
HorseAdmirer chapter 23 . 12/22/2019
This is completely off topic from the last chapter, but I just finished Fates Gamble- both of them- and couldn’t help but wonder something. Could you throw Harry and his girls into the DxD world for the possible next story? He would be given a king piece and a peerage, but I think it would be a great idea!
Derich chapter 16 . 9/12/2019
Why do I keep thinking about Hermione as a cultist/fangirl of Nyarl, especially after what will probably happen to the troll ?
Quatermass chapter 13 . 8/3/2019
Okay, I've got a bit more familiarity with the "Extra" verse partly thanks to "Fate/Grand Order" and the "Extella" games, so I have to point out a couple of things...

1. Meltlilith's official English name, thanks to "Fate/Grand Order", is actually now Meltryllis.

2. The Moon Cell must have records dating back at least 14000 years, given that that was when Altera's original form as Sephyr attacked as Velber's proxy, and the Moon Cell is implied to have been created by the same entities that created Velber, so its records are likely many times older.
Hikari Nova chapter 6 . 7/22/2019
*cackles* you really should make this into a full story
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 2 . 4/13/2019
Neat
BorderLand chapter 13 . 1/6/2019
Wow, Fawkes thought at the end killed me. Yep creature of light my ass, the old bird is just a thrill seeker.
BorderLand chapter 7 . 1/6/2019
Ah the pleasure. His mother would be proud, not the biological one of course.
The Real Hell Fire chapter 6 . 1/5/2019
I had a shit eating smile when Hari was torturin- I mean playing with the trolls hehehe
doubledamn chapter 3 . 10/24/2018
I'm not sure how it would given that Yrael and Orranis never gave themselves to The Charter, but in Tales of the Old Kingdom, we do see how a Necromancer's Bells are made without the Charter, I wonder what would happen if you crafted 2 bells larger than Astarael, baptised them in the Waters of the 8th and 9th Gates, and called the names of the remaining Bright Shiners? What effect would the Bells of Yrael and Orranis have on Death?
Quatermass chapter 2 . 10/2/2018
I'd forgotten you'd done something like this. In my own "Elfen Lied" crossover "Children of the Revolution", Vectors have the ability to deflect spells too...
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2018
3 et g
Kithrin chapter 23 . 8/20/2018
this is, IMO one of the two or three most interesting sets in this.
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