Ooo, really liked this one too. I've given very little thought to Ethan, so I'm now adopting this as my headcanon.

amazing story.

Oh, Ethan. Wow. You are really good at writing minor characters...

this is wonderful
suddenly i am so much more interested in ethan and nemesis
i feel so conflicted about nemesis, and this fic portrays my feelings about her perfectly
and lou and ethan - so cute

That was cool! Like you had totally shown off Ethan and his mom in a badass way. I know that as a writer, you will one day do "great" things.

That was really good! It made me want cry a little but still great!:) I think Nemesis loves Ethan and misses him, I do like their odd relationship. Maybe I'll write a story about them too... But really great story:)

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That was. So. I don't know, that was just awesome. Sad, too, in a way...wow.
Nemesis and Ethan, huh? Out of all the mother-child things you could do you wrote them. And you wrote them beautifully.
I just...wow.
I have no more words.

Awww that's so sad:( She did care and then he dies...! Agh;( But I loved the insight into Ethan's character, that was great and the eye cancer was a really interesting take! So great story:)

Oh gods. This is so damn perfect. You made me love Ethan even more than I already did, and I thought it was impossible. His back story you wrote is really amazing, I love his dad and his medical past. Oh, and his time on deck with Lou and Butch and the others? Magnificent. Riordan should learn how to write Ethan from you. You're a goddess. This is one of the best fanfics I have EVER read and probably ever will. Thank you for sharing your genius with us.

I loved it! I was so excited to see that you had posted something, I always love reading your work! I've always wondered about Ethan and how he lost his eye, so this was amazing! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Well that was… Awesome!

Wow, I love this. Great job!