Aww such a beautiful and touchy story! I could totally understand why Robin married Marian in first place! Nicely done!

PS In your story is this the real marian or Zelena in disguise.?

Your English was perfectly fine, better than most people I know. I also like the story's pov from Marian which is unique to read.

Simplesmente perfeita, perfeita, perfeita!
Gostei de como você retratou todos os personagens. O Robin e a Marian e a minha linda Regina também ficou perfeita mesmo sendo só mencionada aqui.
É pedir muito uma continuação? Adorei mesmo e espero que na série eles tenham o mesmo cuidado que você teve!
PS: Seu inglês é muito bom, menina!
Beijinhos,
1 Lily Evans.

I like your take on how to resolve this situation. Seems true to the characters. Bittersweet.

Gostei bastante! Muito mesmo!
Dá pra sentir a agonia de Robin e Marian... E pense na situação... acreditar que o companheiro está morto, seguir com a vida e, de repente, as coisas dão uma virada de 180 graus.
Mulher, nem sabia que Once Upon a Time tava assim, tão adiantado! Robin Hood? Caraca!
Parei depois que a névoa tomou a cidade... Primeira temporada? Fiquei triste quando o caçador-irlandês-de-sotaque-lindo morreu...
Achei o inglês de primeira

What bad English? This was really good, I would have never guessed in a million years that you're ESL. I really liked what you did with this- in a way I think the Marion stuff could be really interesting next year for the reasons you have in this fic. Robin probably still loves her, but is it as someone he wants to be with for the rest of his life or is it because she was his wife and the mother of his son? I hope you write more fics!

what a great fic! Just absolutely beautiful! This is how I hope they deal with the triangle on the show! I hope you continue to write for OQ!

I think you should write a second chapter. I need all the fluff I can get after the finale! I would love to see Robing go after Regina!

Nice!

Nice one )
I don't think your English was bad but then again English is not my first language although I'm pretty good at it.
But, however, it would be awesome if that would happen in the show. Marin won't give him up though. For her the 30 years never passed and she will probably bond with Elsa (if Elsa's really the new villain) to get Regina out of the way. I don't want to wait until fall!
Your description of Robin Hood seems very real to me. He is that honorable type of man and I fear that this will complicate things with the whole matter.
It's heartbreaking what the writer's did but a happy ending so soon would have been boring, too so I'm kind of enjoying the whole twist but at the same time I feel super bad for Regina. She's always the one who gets her happy ending destroyed.

aaaww...i like it...and i think your english wasn't bad...I undertand it perfectly )

There wasn't 'bad English' as you put it. If you're not fluent in speaking it, you're fluent in writing it. Very nice! I enjoyed reading it. Different from all the other fics, since it's in Marian's POV.

Besides a few words off, minor minor grammar mistakes, your english and story was perfect!

You're English is amazing! And your story is so well written. Emotional and raw but so real & believable. It's really beautiful. You have great talent. Thanks for posting this wonderful OUAT FF!

If only we would see this in the show!