Oh Falkner, you are so naughty. :)

Please update this is a really good story

Seems interesting, you got my attention, update soon please

This story is awesome!
Makes me sad it wasn't finished

great witty personality you gave gold maybe put a pov for silver in violet city and will there be a s.e.x scene with the gym leader?

Hey just wanted to say Good story so far! Oh and sorry if I sound nitpicky (is that a word?) But league is spelled wrong in the first chapter first paragraph. Anyways good story and please keep writing!

Hola my buddy :D continue your story pls cuz I would very much like a continuous story. I'm not a fan of dead stories -_- update soon

For my fans out there, I would like to get 5 reviews be4 chap 2