Wahhh the feels. Great chapter their personalities are perfect

Ugh, why does this have to be complete! It was so AWEOSME!

OMG WRITE MORE IM DYING OVER HERE.

This is a beautiful story and even though it's labeled as complete, I hope you continue, however it stands fine as it is. I love the idea of Simon/Ice King being crazy and forgetful because the crown literally froze his memories, so he gets bits and pieces, but not enough to make sense of them which explains why he is the way he is so well. Why he always finds Marceline but doesn't understand their connection, why he's obsessed with Princesses and of course why he's so lonely. The profound and complex relationship between Ice King and Marceline is my favorite aspect of "Adventure Time" (though it's one of many things to love about this show) and you captured it so beautifully here.

My one issue is your grammar as there are a lot of errors that are hard to overlook, and sometimes made things a little bit confusing. I got the impression that English isn't your first language and I looked at your profile and saw that I was right (that said, aside from your spelling and grammar your English is nonetheless quite good) so I suggest you find a beta to proofread your work before posting. You're such a good writer and it would do your stories a world of good. :-)

This was a very good story. I liked the idea of frozen memories and the sanctuary within the mind. My only thought is that you really need some on to check over your work. I found a lot of spelling and grammar errors and while I enjoyed the concept I kept getting messed up with the spelling. This was a great story and I am sorry for the long, and kind of mean review.

An excellently told story. You really expressed the emotional connection between Simon and Marceline quit well. The labyrinth in Simon's mind is greatly detailed with the frozen memories. The thoughts that represent Simon's love for Betty and Marceline are creative characters. The ending is a little sad, but it dose offer hope. Simon is still there and there is a chance he might come back.

I enjoyed this story greatly. Good job.

This was a great story

You even included that line from the song! This is so sad! Gah! Poor Simin being trapped in a place like that for so long. I really liked the concept of the mind labyrinth that keeps changing with memory layers being frozen as soon as they're made. I hope they can save him

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Simon! Whyyyyyyyyyyyy?! So sad , and yet I love it ! Gosh ... I'm gonna go curl up I a corner ( of my closet) and cry ...

This made me cry! Poor Marcy and Simon but it's really hopeful for the future too. Thank you so much for writing this!

Oh my gosh that is so sweet and I love it , it really explains alot ... * sniff* I feel like crying tears of sadness and tears of joy ... I don't know why! This is going on my favorites now !
* sniff* you are a very good writer !