Reviews for This Lost Soul |
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![]() ![]() I think Glory has a crush. |
![]() ![]() WELL NOW IT"S 2 YEARS INSTEAD OF 1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Not dead” he says. It been almost a year buddy. |
![]() ![]() meh |
![]() ![]() *throws off Stasis Snare, yawns* Oh! *looks at camera* Hello! Things are Descending Into Madness here. Let's hope that Glory didn't kill Scarlet in this scenario. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Long time no see...I suspect the storm's lack of naturalness has messed with the cameras a bit. Either that, or the guy behind the camera is just randomly slewing it around all over the place to post on NetTube later... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Error 524: processing halted ... requires new statement. TL/DR: It's alive! I had just about forgotten this existed. I will say I was a bit confused here, but that could be because of the whole year that passed .. and cause I still never read that one story. |
![]() ![]() Let the crazy brought by Malefor begin! Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() Shenanigans! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope you have a plan to show the reader that Inferno, the viewpoint character for most of the story so far, has not died and been replaced with a 'cooler' doppelgänger, because that's the vibe I get from the last couple chapters. Or is this a thing from one of the source works? Because I still haven't read a word of either of them. And besides, an idea like that still deserves to be done justice. |
![]() ![]() I like insanity; I follow the freaking LPW thread on a forum somewhere! And I like Neopolitan. Good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was f*cking done! |
![]() ![]() Congrats. That of all things was not something I would expect. Good chapter, and I shall see you again soon, optimistically! |
![]() ![]() Oh I don't know, at a standstill? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Erm...what? Er...ah...I mean, Good chapter! Can't wait to see more! ..I'm still lost. Who's using psyker powers here? You know what? Forget I said anything. I think I have to re-read the entire thing again, to better understand what's going on. |