please continue

In chapter 2 you said irene was his wife in chapter 4 it sats serenity

please update/

Love it please update

when he said sale it whole or sale it by part, is it weird that i suddenly thought of a person and body parts? he is a feared mob boss.

please finish the chapter the story is getting good I can't wait see you up in the next

Love the story keep up the good work do you think her father will be happy who she's dating i cant white to read the next ch

Like the the story I can't weight Fore next Ch serious and tell her father who she is dating

Oh great story so far! Can't wait for update!

i like it so much! i cant wait to find out more to the story and what happens with senera's father when he finds out! please release soon

Lol I am loving it, please pretty please continue

I love this fanfic and you should make more chapters of this fanfic.

Omg love this story. It is a very unique. Can't wait for more chapters

Good so far please continue!

I am really excited about this story. I seriously probably check to see if if it's been updated every single day! I was definitely anticipating the meeting of the pair. I was surprised that they met accidentally. Gotta love that destiny stuff. :)
I felt like the story had great strong characters but their personalities are kind of all over the place. Everyone's is for the most part consistent except for Dariens. You start off the story with him being a ruthless self serving villan and then he is in the car with Kent being a soft, unsure, lost sole, and then he's having wonderful (amazingly written :) dreams of sexcapades with her and on the prowl. ..ready to hunt her down. Then the day he meets her hes a giddy school boy.
I totally understand where your going with this...this woman makes him feel different so he's sort of loosing focus and being shy, but like you said this guy has been around the block so while he may hold her on a pedi stood and find her to be everything he dreams don't let him loose his dark ruthlessness. Have him talk to her suavly and be debonair but don't let him be a nerd who can't form a complete sentence.
This guy is a mob boss he wants to totally possess this woman and make her his. Yet he wants her to come to him of her own free will... come on strong but leave her wanting more.
The fall was perfect! Very romantic and the way he looked at the playground settings was amazingly sweet. I want to see him in this next chapter really come on to her. Maybe he orders her a nice meal, they start talking about their jobs...he's a "business man" speaking of which he gets a call and he's gotta go. He leaves her with a card and a kiss on the cheek. Very nonchalant. She doesn't call for a while and he gets uncomfortable and then he finds out where she is and runs into her on purpose...or she's walking home late and some thugs on the street are chasing after each other and she gets caught up in it and he shelters her from a shot... and that leads her to going to his place. Nursing his wounds. Or if your going for a more low key kind of start to your story you have them make a date and have it go from there... well just a few ideas...I know you said writers block can get in the way so I'm trying to get the juices flowing so that I can see an update soon. :) Thanks again for the great story, keep it up!