Oooo. I quite like this. This was a lovely change of pace. Keep up the awesome work. :)

I absolutely loved this. It's interesting to see Beth being the one having a hard time with words. I also really like your back story to Beth.

This is sweet, really like this... Especially the skipping out Beth being kidnapped - it makes me too sad! Awesome :)

Ok, I'm really surprised at how much I really really liked this. You pulled this off, somehow, being dark and weird, still in character, dialogue feels spot on, and you still feel all heart-warmed at the end. What the fuck did you just do?! Lol sorcery.

so sweet! omg! and her saying that he is showing his love for her by doing actions! and everything was just beautiful!

So adorable: I loved it! Just the right amount of light and dark for me.

This is really good! I love your version of Beth! :D