great story can't wait to see what you come up with next

'Dov' means 'dragonkind'. So 'Dovstrunkiin' means 'dragonkind that is storm born'.

Dovahhe neither have male/female nor do they reproduce. They possibly do have genders (due to mention of jills and drakes, but I feel as if that was something thrown in because the devs were hesitant not to have dovahhe that were referred to as female.)

It would probably have been easier/better (at least in my opinion) tonhave him turn into a dovah via dracochrysalis - this might be because I just hate six-limbed dragons (they look wrong). However, if you must have a six-limbed dragon, there's a website for a model for one that doesn't look awkward and clumsy, just remove the spaces: ww w. blackdrago s cienc e/anatomy _west. htm

Human hair genetics isn't quite sonsimple - or simple at all. Multiple genes cause hair colour. IIRC, there was a Baratheon(M)-Targaryen(F) marriage which resulted with all children having Targaryen hair.

One should not send a horse straight into a canter from a halt - especially as the Night's Watch horse was neither warmed up and had come directly from a stable in freezing temperatures. I'm being perfectly serious when I say that you could kill the horse by not warming up.

So... Joffrey wasn't affected at all by the terrible way he was raised? It was all because of being cursed? Way to let Cersei off the hook for raising such a monster.

Yeah, sure Arya, the economy isn't a thing and you aren't going to ruin it.

IIRC, folding steel/iron was something only used when the quality of the metal was poor - folded metal is not superior, IIRC.

Dragonish? I think you mean Dovahzul.

A 20hh horse would be near useless in battle. And a horse raised by a human will tend to have issues and nit know how to interact with others nor how to be a horse.

No normal horse could 'gallop for miles and miles'. Horses will generally only gallop about 2km. The longest race done by Thoroughbreds (i.e. horses that are bred to gallop very fast for longer than normal horses) is 4km.

Joffrey's and Cersei's change in character is a bit sudden, don't you think? I doubt words would sway either of them and anything that vaguely makes Cersei feel that she or her childen are threatened sends her into mega protective mode - to the detriment of everyone around her, including her children.

Horses aren't dogs nor are they cats - they don't get white markings across their chests. The only white marking similar to what you described is caused by the overo gene - but that, IIRC, first affects the horse's flanks and spreads from there. Put the marking on its face, on the bridge of its nose - that's called a stripe.

I don’t understand. Your story started off well. But where is Theon? Also I’m not quite a fan of Sansa being already a strong person. Catelyn didn’t seem to show any arguement. I felt it was all rush. Tyrion wasn’t mention much either..

Finally, a *good* crossover between these two!
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a shame you left this unfinished! Good work.

A long sword is a two handed sword.

Somewhat entertaining but very naive story. The world is described how a young, inexperienced person would view it, and it really makes it hard to get into it.

Cute idea, but your dialogue is extremely awkward. Try and add more emotion, more actions by the characters between/during dialogue. It would help convey a more realistic scene far more efficiently.

please update

Please update soon.

One of the best stories for this crossover. Also is it weird that when I read him speaking as a dragon the tone I imagined was a mixture of Parthanax and the massive dragon from Dragons Dogma. That deep tone is awsome!

Hey this is a great story! You should pick it back up again. You are doing a great job with Sansa, Jon, with Bjorn.

sad that this is now abandoned