(In Palpatine's voice) Good, good! Use your hatred!

Hmmm... the plot is moving and I am enjoying that. Again your writing is almost perfect but never quite as you have the habit of leaving out minor details that connect the story. For instance 'he whipped out a laptop'. From where? Did he always have a laptop or was it in his pocket?

Nice stuff. I was a bit surprised that the doctors were so willing to divulge their identities once they knew who they were treating but it's your call.

Now I hope that Natalia at least holds out for a while and doesn't cave immediately.

Hmmm I love the concept and, for the most part, the writing is decent although it became a bit shaky in some places. For example, he bound her wrists but surely that would've been agony for her broken bones?

And you made this whole deal about how death was the only escape for her but she just quietly let him taker her?

But then again this is only the first chapter. To the next one.

Thank you.

Just found this story, finished it and I loved it there are not enough clintasha stories out there and I loved that it wasn't all romance and that you had missions and it was like reading a spy novel

Can't believe I reached the end of this story! Well done for writing it, it was amazing! Definitely the best clintasha story I've read and my new fave! I can already tell that there's lot of re reading planned for me in the future haha. Moving on to the sequel now, so excited! You're an amazing writer. Thank you for writing and sharing 33

Perfect ILY moment 3

Lovely to see Natasha opening up more and more 3

ILoved this chapter! It was great to see them work as partner, and it's exciti to see the relationship development: him calling her Nat, her smiling, her finding him attractive, him being protective against the other agents etc.

Awww love Natasha missing Clint!

OMG One of the fanfics out there

this story is amazing

Unbelievable. Spectacular. Amazing.

One of the best chapters yet. It was a bit slow to start off i was worried how you were going to link it to the movie but i think you did a fantastic job. I'm gonna say it and say this is the best fanfiction i have ever read. Not just the best clint and natasha fanfiction, but the best one period. I know this story is old but i hope you keep writing this is fantastic.