Reviews for Hold On |
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TashaRose chapter 1 . 9/24/2014 Beautiful one shot. |
Kate chapter 1 . 5/17/2014 Such an endearing story! I hope to read more from you during this long, painful hiatus |
Nimueiswriting chapter 1 . 5/17/2014 It's great! You could follow this fic, Snow and Emma come back to the flat and Hook is a wonderful babysitter, he's singing to the baby and he is quiet and interested in it :) |
PsychoNinjaWolf chapter 1 . 5/17/2014 This was a really nice story. I could see this happening in canon. You have them all in charicter and even added a little humor to the angst (which I loved lol). It was very well writen. You're a talented writer and I would love to read more. Keep up the good work. PsychoNinjaWolf |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2014 you should write more |
butterflykisses0 chapter 1 . 5/16/2014 Aww |
Lacorra chapter 1 . 5/16/2014 Ha. Poor Hook! That's classic! And Emma oh sweet Emma girl life is so hard.. But she's got such an amazing mom! Loved this! |
Shel chapter 1 . 5/16/2014 Very sweet...thanks for sharing... |
Davis Family Fan chapter 1 . 5/16/2014 This is wonderful and true to canon. It would be refreshing if they had this conversation as it suits what Emma would undoubtedly feel in spite of the conflicting fake memories she has. Great work. |
Tandy chapter 1 . 5/15/2014 Sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet. |
oldmoviewatcher chapter 1 . 5/15/2014 That was adorably cute and should happen! Nice job! |
Invisible Observer 3 chapter 1 . 5/15/2014 That was cute and brings up a fair point. Poor Killian though. He is probably thinking what is wrong with this family. You shove a baby into the arms of a guy with a HOOK for a hand. What if the baby got hurt. Now your leaving me with him. I am over 300 years old. Do you know how many of those years involved babies? 0. The Snow and Emma mother daughter bonding was good and I like your mental notes. I hope you do a story or two on them. Though it wouldn't surprise me if the working on showing the pirate we trust him note was Snow and David leaving Killian alone with the baby more so they can sleep. |
gabrielleizzy45 chapter 1 . 5/15/2014 Well...that was adorable and realistic |