You might wanna consider getting a beta reader...the story itself is nice, it's just that a bit of polishing wouldn't hurt.

::sniff:: HOW COULD HE TURN DOWN YAMI? :( CONTINUE SOON!

KRM:Heh..heh...I know what Yami's thinking

:*blows her nose*That song was so sad!

So many fics I liked and I didn't realize had been updated! Great story! I hope you decide to continue it befire next year! *wink* ;-)

Please continue this soon! I love your story! It's funny, angsty, and cute at the same time! Continue as soon as you can!

that was SO good, YOU MUST UPDATE!

Burning: oh very good so plz pupdate soon as oon as you can plz

UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON!

OR I WILL KEE EE EE EEL YOU!

Just Kiddin'

I like it! _~

GREAT! plz continue! me wanna read more-

StarFlower: So sad! Continue soon! Yami and Yugi forever!

Yami: *backs away slowly*

Yugi: -.-;;

StarFlower: *pulls Yami back and huggles him and Yugi* You guys are so cute! You guys belong together! *stars appears in eyes* Kawaii!

Yami and Yugi: -;

StarFlower: *holds up signs, banners, and everything else that can show the message of 'Yami and Yugi Forever!'*

Yugi: While Sakura goes on like this, we would like to ask for you to continue

StarFlower: Yugi! What did I say about calling me 'Sakura'? *chases after him*

~* StarFlower aka Sakura *~ *sighs*

Burning: ;_; how sad plz update soon as soon as you can plz

KRM:Update! Please Soon! This is so good. I just love Yugi and Yami Yugi stories.

Yugi:Uh *blushes*

Yami:Please may I sing the song

Kugi:Sure

Yami Yugi: *ducktapes his brothers mouth*

Yami:onmynsdihgf

Awww! Poor Yami-koi! What happens next!

...Anzu... I hate her too. She's scary with all her little 'friendship speeches' *cringes*

Hope there's more soon!

Ja ne,

Hotaru Sasaki

*sob* It's so sad! I hate Anzu!(DIE ANZU!) Please update.

HEY! I thought you said that this wasn't going to be a one-shot! WELL? Come on! Please continute this!

F.K.A. Maria