i honestly wanted things to take a romantic turn, but i can see why they didnt. if not for the effort u seem to put into every line, i wld have wanted a continuation.

thank you for adding a fifth chapter as its ending. always a delight to have more to read of something so well written

That. Was. Beautiful. But only 5 chapters huh? This would've been an amazing start to a Sokkla fic. I hope you consider turning into one. Sokka could make Azula realize that she is not the monster she thinks she is through the character of Boggart. On the other hand, Sokka would be captivated by the other side of Azula's character, which is this vulnerable girl wanting love but doesnt know how to get it or that she even wants it. I absolutely loved the banter between Sokka and Azula in this fic which I believe what makes them such a lively pair.

Well, that was one intense chapter and I'm glad I finally had time to read it! I couldn't get my eyes off the screen when Bogar was torturing Azula, the tension you brought to the scene was truly brilliant. I thoroughly enjoyed Sokka's argument with his brain at the chapter's beginning, by the way. Sokka really is one of a kind xD

And of course, I agree with Sokka being more capable of killing than his fellow friends. Just look at the Melon Lord Incident and reach your own conclusions. Too bad they can't get the bounty now, but it's perfectly understandable that Azula would act as she did. And that stone is some seriously freaky stuff, huh?

One chapter left, huh? Too bad, really... but do know that if you ever feel like taking this story further, you've got a reader in me :)

That was really intense. I would muster a better description but I'm too tired and a bit drunk.

I'm pretty frustrated at Sokka for not apologizing. He clearly understands that his failure was only due to his own ego and lack of skill and training. He might not admit it, for now, but he understands that, so we might get an acknowledgement of that fact sooner or later.

I half expected Azula to fail, since it would make for a nice way for Sokka to recover some of his shattered ego.

What exactly did Azula see or read from Sokka's thousand-yard stare? You say it's darkness, but what does that really mean? Lack of conscience? Apparent outwardly lack of emotion at taking a life? Maybe some kind of cold-bloodedness? I'm curious about that. Maybe it will come out at one point or another?

All in all this has been great and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Which does seem to look like it's going to be the last one, which pains me greatly.

Epic chapter I loved it and can't wait for more.

Great character depth and development. I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.

Really like the way you present your characters...especially the OCs, how you give them an interesting back story rather than just making them a stereotype.
Also love the banter between Sokka and Azula...can't wait to read the next chapter

You say you're a mediocre writer, and yet this is easily one of the best stories on this site. Azula and Sokka feel in character, and their banter is hilarious. Another thing I enjoyed about this FanFic is that you didn't make Sokka basically useless except for his humour, which is something a lot of writers do. Also, I found Bogar's backstory to be very interesting; I always prefer a humanized villain over one that's pure evil.

I really love this story and I can't wait for more.

Oh, gods, I laughed my butt off with the takesies-backsies! I swear a fic hadn't made me laugh this hard in some time! Good job with that xD I will say, the whole discusion and parting of the ways was just what I knew would happen with these two, foolish as they are. Sokka, really, you need to hold that tongue of yours once in a while...

Bogar is quite an interesting character, I'm intrigued over how the next chapter shall develop. Good luck with the next one, and keep up the hard work! :)