Very intrigued by this so far. It's rare to find a story where a real generation occurs and to add your metacrisis twist... Hadn't noticed that it hasn't been added to for quite a while until I got to the end of this chapter. Hope you get back to it some day.

O hh when I watched the whole series twice I had dreams about this

Wow. What an intense chapter with Davros and Rose confrontation. And the Doctor appearing out of studden was the cherry on the cake. Have a nicd day.

Poor Donna. I really feel pity for her. For Rose,i only feel disgust after she ripped the Tardis apart and made Donna go back to the past with an machine that could have killed her before even getting back to the past to stop hersealf turn right. Have a nice day.

What an unexpected twists of events with Rose claiming to be the Doctor. I can not wait to see what happens next. Have a nice day.

Intersting chapter that you brought here. Definatly loved how you brought the prospect of the Meta-Crisis. Have a nice day.

Wow. This was actually an intersting chapter with the Doctor explaining why she wants to be ginger. And i definatly loved Donna calling the Doctor Dumbo. Great chapter once again. Have a nice day.

Great chapter and an impresive twist. If you need help with the story,i would be more than happy to help you with sugestions. Have a nice day.

Hello there. Writing to inform you that you are BRILLIANT and FANTASTIC and I am FREAKING OUT. I love this. Very much. And your characterization thus far is spot on!

oh boy this is interesting I like it though and I want to see what happens nex5\t

Loved This Story is great. Well Poor younger Doc. Broken feet? He won't be able to burst running toward daleks...unless his fell because his foot failed him... Ey Now i got Lost. Who is the younger? the one with floppy hair? or meta crisis? The latste to come is same time younger and the older/
Younnger for being the newly born and older for being the latest update...AHHHHH

is the younger He is the new born...so younger? but his also later version...Updated as Cynerman would call... AHHHHH Time Paradox...

well, this is certainly a twist in a different direction...lovely update though and look forward to more.

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Wooo! An update! :)
I'm excited about this, this story is so original and I love it - it's even making me forget that I hate Tentoo because you have them as separate people!
Ouchie, poor Donna.
Anyway - lovely chapter and I can't wait for the next one! XD

Ah, the classic gag of the Doctor's pockets containing random stuff that couldn't possibly fit in normal pockets.

I see the description now has a warning about character death. Who might it be... Donna might be a little too obvious at this point. I very much doubt it refers to Jack even though he's already died once. It can't be River.