Well, hello there. I've got no clue whether you'll see this or not, but when in Rome and all that. I love what you've done with this story, and I'd love to see what you do next.

Too bad it took so long to get rid of Snape. Still, the fic has kept me entertained for a good many hours.

Luna and Santa. Luna at her quirky best.

Thank you for sharing. I do hope you find the time and inspiration to continue with this.

Please finish this story

Your writing chops make up for poor pacing and unlikable protagonists. Seriously excellent scene to scene writing, but the redundancy of the scenes made me want to stop reading and the absolute backfoot the protagonists were on the whole time ultimately killed the story from me.

You have some truly excellent ideas and some unique plot twists that I am really enjoying. However, your English skills need some strict attention. You do not seem to realize the difference between plural and possessive. There is hardly a single appropriately placed apostrophe in your first three chapters. One cat: cat. More than one cat: cats (NOT cat's). One Potter: Potter. More than one Potter: Potters (NOT Potter's). There are NO apostrophes in pluralizations. This is Primary School English you need to review. Belonging to one Potter: Potter's. Belonging to more than one Potter: Potters' (or Potters's). The possessive requires an apostrophe (with a few exceptions: his, hers, ours and theirs). The paw of the cat; cat’s paw. The idea of the girls; girls’ idea. An apostrophe is almost ALWAYS needed to make the possessive. You especially have issues making the possessive case.

Keep writing! You can greatly improve your readability by paying more attention to every word you type.

Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction.

Long winded and drags on. Not a cent of humour though it’s listed as one. No retaliation from Harry and co. it’s more of a wait and watch, pacifist approach. Which is fine, though not to my taste. Not my cup of tea anymore.

This is a very interesting and entertaining story, I really hope to see more in the future.

Thanks for a brilliant story

If you ever return to it, the great. But if not, it was loads of fun. Much appreciated

Delightful

Absolutely enjoyed it. Thanks

Good on Ginny not joining.

But get locket from her. In Canon Tom essentially raped her and no on ever mentioned it

Oh Snape so has to go down

Was wondering

Thought maybe Nott