Great piece of writing x

Lovely.

Lovely. Really enjoyed getting into Oliver's thought on this. Loved his temptation to race back. Very in character. Well done.

Beautifully written - you made his internal struggle so real. Loved it!

Oh this was such a powerful insight into what he was thinking and I have to say you really made his thoughts seem very Oliver like, the regrets but knowing his decision truly can't be reversed, really loved the way you expressed how deeply he cares and the fact that even though he loves her he knows they can never be together

! LOVE. Especially the part when Oliver pulls over and seriously considers going back for her. And how telling her he loves her was as easy as breathing.

Gorge.