Reviews for Batty
GodlyJewel chapter 1 . 5/14/2016
Haha I loved his reaction to Flutterbat. She really had a cute look as a vampire pony, and I'm glad she got to keep the fangs in the end. You make a point, ol' Dissy has a ways to go before anything serious can happen, so it's nice to see them explore and get little crushes before taking big steps.
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 1/1/2016
So adorable. It's cute how he found 'Flutterbat' attractive too.
rndomfan chapter 1 . 6/1/2015
Just when you had me thinking it was gonna stay platonic... YOWZA! you give me that ending. My heart did a little dance, that it did. I love how you write fluttercord, because you don't make it happen overnight (and thus, overdone). Very nice writing style you have!
Hysteria Rogers chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
hey the sequel should discord admitting he likes flutters bat appearance
Snowfrost chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
I KNEW that you took the Saucer Gag from somewhere! Where, didnt know.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
Cute af, one of the better fluttercord pieces I've read :) I always liked the idea of Discord being into the FlutterBat :3 now it happened and I'm happy that I found a story around it. Thank you c:
Wildtail of Wind chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
This is very entertaining — and very well written. Your writing skills are explicable, your storytelling skills more so. Combine that with great My Little Pony characters and an interesting Beauty and the Beast ship, and you end up with this. Bravo.
Hello chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Please do a sequel! This is really good. :D
YarningChick chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
I have to say that this is my favorite interpretation of Discord finding out about Flutterbat. The other ones were cute, but they didn't really go into the emotional detail you did. I have to agree that Discord has a long way to go before he's ready for a romantic relationship, and Fluttershy does seem like the most likely candidate (Plus it would be so CUTE!)
Thanks for an enjoyable read!
mh chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
I loved it. I agery with you about Fluttershy and Discord's relationship. Maybe you could make a continuing-on of this story, showing the gradual progress of their relationship? That is if you wont to continue the story.

Maybe the bat fangs at the end is just the beginning warning that she will return to her flutterbat form. But this time it is a slow peruses and,if not stopped, a permanent one. that way fluttershy still has her sweet kind normal domineer as her body is slowly changing and as it continuous she starts to fill her mind and hart starting to change to that of the uncaring flutterbat.
Maybe the six find out, curtsy of Twilight's library, that they have to find a magical something or other ( Oh magic blue garlic haha) by the next whatever ( faze of the moon, sun rise whatever) and they need Discord's help. You could make so that Discord has to chose between Fluttershy's the kind and caring how touched his hart ,oh the pretty Flutterbat who would never truly care about him or any other pony. oh or Discord could be use his magic through the search to help fluttershy keep her free will thou her form is becoming more and more bat like. He mite be wounder if he could keep things the way they are, that way in his opinune he gets the best of both worlds. He could essaly trice every one into believing the (blue garlic) did not work. Discord most find out what miens more to him. His selfish desires for the perfect mare or Fluttershy's happiness.

Wow o.k sorry I have had writers block for a mouth or so...gues this miens am curd :) you do not have to use this but if you want I give you foll less So say I Marie Hicks haha.. ogh I am so tared. Also I am sorry if someone else had this ideal I did not know I just came up with it.
Hi chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
Hi is my nickname until I get an account on here. This is awesome! I love it!

God Bless :)
Boop-machine chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
This was absolutely adorable, I do hope to see more fluttercord from you (platonic and romantic)
also that ending was absolutely perfect
DisneyFanatic2364 chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
BWAHAHAHAHA! I love Discord's reaction to Flutterbat! And yeah, it's clear he's not ready to take that big a step with Fluttershy yet (but he clearly wants to, lol).
Alara Rogers chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
This is really nice. I like that while this lays the groundwork for Fluttercord, you recognize that Discord is totally not ready for a romantic relationship yet in terms of his social development/redevelopment (I'm one of the ones who tends to think he *has* had relationships in the past of some kind, but years of being immortal, alone, omnipotent and practically insane have warped him to the point where he really needs to rebuild any social skills he ever had.) I like that his reaction to his own attraction was approximately as mature as Discord gets (yes, silly sight gags like the heart breaking open the doors in his chest, but he understands that it would complicate or damage his friendship with Fluttershy to try to pursue that), and that he totally didn't perceive the problem with going behind her back to see the bat thing until she pointed it out.

I also like that she was very firm with him, but forgiving once he admitted that it was a mistake and he won't repeat it. People sometimes think of Fluttershy as using her friendship as a weapon to force Discord to conform, but I don't think that's it at all; she's using her friendship as a tool to force him to learn how to actually *be* a friend, which will benefit him and everyone he ever interacts with in the long run.
Secret chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
I love this sooooooooooo much!
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