Please write more

Love it want more

Very good

I like your story so far:) Phoenixes are one of my favourite mythical creatures! Looking forward to when she meets Klaus:D

I really enjoyed the chapter! No worries, the flashback scene flowed very well and didn't seem out of place! I can't wait to read more and read the next chapter! Good job!

I really enjoyed the banter, I feel like it can be used in the present from Emerson just with more sarcasm

Hey person I don't know but writes amazing stories.
Like I said the plot and the general flow of the story is remarkable and there is only one thing I can complain about - You use the word "Emerson" wayyyyy too much. Try using pronouns and spare me the annoying headaches please.
Regardless of weather you take my advise or not I am going to HAVE to read the story to completion. So no pressure.

I absolutely love your story and your OC. I find it incredibly interesting that Emerson is battling cancer it makes this story and her character very unique. I love her relationshipwith Rebekah and the idea that Rebekah finally gets to play a large role in a story. I can't wait for Nik and Emerson's reunion. I'm looking forward to see the difference in the Miakealson's siblings approach to Emerson, can't wait for your next update!

The dreams that continue when you wake are the ones that tend to haunt and control your mind for days on end. I both love and hate them. But then again feeling the sensation of Elijah's kiss most certainly won't end up as a negative for me :)

Perhaps Emerson's grandmother was in a rush to marry her off because she knew about the brothers and their secret? I wonder how that would have been received back then? Two rather handsome and eligible bachelors being ignored by the Matron of Emerson's family as suitable prospects?

You really captured the period well with the dialogue and I actually felt I was sitting in the garden with them - that's how vivid the image was in my head. I love when that happens :)

I wonder what will happen when Emerson arrives at Rebekah's? Fun times ahead...maybe.

Thanks for the update!

S-M1

Please dont make this one of those DUMBASS 'love' triangles...please

Well that didn't quite go the way I think Emerson wanted it too, but at least some more of the hidden pieces where placed on the table for her. She just has to figure out where they fit into the overall puzzle that's her life.

How sad that because of something that her Grandmother did in the past that Emerson's existence is cursed. I wonder what happened? Losing love is very powerful and can make even the most timid of us want to strike out in ways we never thought imaginable. I hope we get to find out exactly what happened.

I have to wonder if Nik will make an appearance next chapter? The way Rebekah acted and what she said I think it's going to be really interesting, but when you add in the unpredictable nature of Nik; things might be about to get a little more dangerous for the citizens of Mystic Falls and dare I say, a little more bloody.

I can't wait!

Thanks for updating :)

S-M1

Loved this chapter! Haven't reviewed in a couple but I intend to get better about that. I actually think this is my first review in a long time! Anyway, back to the point of this whole thing. I really love seeing the early stages of all their meetings and their relationships. Loved the meeting with Elijah and her flirtations with him. Also love seeing Rebekah and Emery's budding friendship. Looking forward to more!

Please put her with elijah

Or you could pair her with both, but I'm partial to Klaus.

I would prefer that Emery would end up with Klaus. I know a lot of people would like Elijah to be with her, but Klaus would be more understanding with her cancer and all. Plus Elijah would be non stop looking for a cure and not take the time to be with her like Klaus would, and I know Klaus would do the same thing like Elijah would and look for a cure, but he would stop and be with Emery through the chemo treatments and all. I love your story, keep up the good work, and happy writing :).

One question though, is Elena and the gang gonna be Emery's friend and know about her cancer like Elijah and Rebekah (so far)?