The beginning of an abusive relationship. How sweet!
When will people, and more often women, learn that you can‘t change somebody, and that this kind of scenario is what we are socially conditioned to believe is romantic, but is unhealthly and that it will end in pain for them.

Incredibly good! I've been coming back here intermittently since before I had an account to reread— and it's just as good every time. Leaves me wanting more, of course, but that's just another sign of quality.

I can't say I ship it, but, WOW, this is an amazingly well-written crossover fic! Amazing justice was done to Maglor and Susan both.

This was really unique. I rather enjoyed it.

Susan/Maglor? I SHIP IT!
I like how they both try to kill each other in the beginning ;) typical Maglor. The blood of Feanor is easily angered...

I like this fanfic. Maglor/Susan is very interesting :) I was actually more fond of Maedhros but this kind of balances it out!

I enjoyed that very much, thank you. I especially liked the ring, and how it emanated a sense of power (to one who could discern it.)

I enjoyed reading this. And still hope that Susan will find her way back to Narnia (never liked how she was separated from her siblings in the end, and for some kind of life lesson I suppose). Also I liked your characterization of Maglor - just the right mix of dangerousness, pain, his own flavor of kindness and the classic Noldorin (or Fëanorian) arrogance.

Hello, I just discovered your story and I like it very much. Susan and Maglor are both strong people and very stuborn. Their relationship will be interesting. I hope that some day, you will write a sequel ? Thank you for your writing.

This is pretty shitty.

:D This is perfect. Just the idea, how you wrote it, everything. The two people left behind. I hope Susan really does go and meet up with Maglor again!

*glee*

Still love this. I've already gushed plenty over on the Board, so I'll spare you that, but believe me, I still love this. Very very much. And I ship them even more now.

-Aila

I really enjoyed this; good show that author.