I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

lol this was interesting too bad its dead and never gonna get updated.

Hope you come back to update this story soon, I'm glad that May and Ash are friends again and I'm curious to see whats up with all the overgrown violent pokémon that are appearing.

I like amourshipping but I'm glad advanceshipping won, it's still my favourite pairing. And i agree it would be weird for another girl to appear all of a sudden after all the setup you've done with May. As for the May in this story, I believe she's earned a second chance to be with Ash as long as she works for it, I don't see Ash initiating anything between them anytime soon other than being friendly again so anything beyond that or even romance looks to be up to her.

Just had a flashback to watching Titanic when Rose jumped off the lifeboat to stay with Jack despite the lifeboat being her ticket to safety... Just like how May changed her mind and jumped off the boat to avoid leaving Ash even though she's leaving her brother and other friends and Drew too (even if she ended their relationship, she'd still care for him somewhat this soon after the break up)

Muy bueno g

I love this, please update!

Great job! Love it!

Awesome! Love it!

keep up the good update the next chapter.

I look forward to seeing how this develops!

Great job, as usual. I missed this story getting updates and it was one of the few advance shipping stories I could rely on anymore. Can't wait to see what happens in Kanto and when May, Dawn, and Gary get back to Oblivia.

Aw. I really like the story! Also, ha! 7.8/10 May could've been more gracefully for Ash.

BlazingBlueFire14 shall be gone!

This is actually one of my favorites to read I like it

Bro, I get that you like advanceshipping, but wtf are you thinking putting it into this story? You make May out as an inconsiderate, relationship hopper with Ash getting over her, and now this? No story has ever confused me more, because no story has ever turned a 180 so quickly. I don't want to even follow this story anymore, because I hate May's character in this story and you've just paired them up. Like, May is cheating on Drew till chapter 8! Who cares if he's a jerk, she's still cheating.