Reviews for When Time Stops
rebaine mira chapter 42 . 7/10
this was one hell of a bouitifeal story you had me crying when drago was going to die or when Harry's father was going to sacrifice from self to his child lover I loved it it was one damn of wonderful reading for me I hop you will continue that way and maybe publish your own stories you seem to have the potential to
Hannah42992 chapter 42 . 3/30
This was a well written and thought out story. Full of twists and turns. Your character and plot development is some of the better that I've seen. I've read hundreds of stories and that fact that I called off work to finish it in one setting says a lot. Great job!
Heksy chapter 42 . 2/16
What an amazing story, though I wonder about one thing:
whatever happened to Chaymn?
Lightseed chapter 42 . 2/15
Thus was such a stunning story! I loved the Immortal concept! It reminded me a bit of Faerie Courts and Lore! Well done! I myself am very fond of writing about Immortals, long lived beings, and Others! This called to me! Again, very well done!
~ Lightseed
Pixie8859 chapter 1 . 1/17
Chapter 1 is so full of spelling errors I'm having a hard time figuring out what the proper word should be. Spellcheck is actually available in over 50 languages now. Why wasn't it used?
Belliska chapter 42 . 11/2/2019
Kudos ️️️
gindensmi chapter 42 . 10/17/2019
This was alsome!
dmalfoy1973 chapter 42 . 9/21/2019
This is great
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 10 . 9/3/2019
Well, I think I’ve reached my limit on this story. I like to read stories that are different and not always the same kind of thing, but I’ve reached the halfway point on this story and my uneasy feeling I had with this story has not gone away.
Matt chapter 23 . 2/3/2019
Did you ever pay the slightest bit of attention in your English classes? Because your spelling, grammar, and punctuation are all HIDEOUSLY bad! However, I actually enjoy reading your stories. If only you had a beta to help you with your English language issues.
WyteWolf91 chapter 42 . 12/13/2018
I actually really liked this one. The end was a little anti-climatic for me but that's just me lol. I really enjoyed and couldn't stop reading it till it was done.
Guest chapter 42 . 10/21/2018
Absolutely perfect ending to an awesome, well developed story. Loved it loved it!
You took the cliché right out of the 'creature inheritance/multiple mates' cliché. One of the best one of this genre I've found minus the odd bit of missed proofreading - and it's fanfic so if you can't overlook a couple typos and grammar things you should really not be reading it anyway right?
Bravo!
ShadowThief126 chapter 42 . 8/3/2018
Great story. I’m glad that one life wasn’t exchanged for another.
DRINKnotTHINK13 chapter 23 . 7/25/2018
I love the story; Harry‘s attitude is cool!
Uhm, it’s probably a bit late to ask this, but wasn‘t Harry expelled in the prologue?
krnegi91 chapter 42 . 4/25/2018
Awesome story! And wonderful ending :) definitely a recommended read

Spoilerish.. BEWARE!
But they might be a time discrepancy with the epilogue...
Earlier it was clear that 1yr in mortal realm 60yrs in shadow realm. (A MONTH BEING 10YRS IN THE SHADOW REALM)
But the epilogue incorrectly mentions it as 10yrs 1yr .
So, HP is basically over 15,000yrs old at this point...lol
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