okay how the hell is it going to work with John's dad being the villain? I think this does need a sequel just because of that. I can't believe that anything would happen to make a parent who loves their child attack them.
thank you for sharing this with us please do write a sequel

Great story

i love how you made jim and seb the parents

i love gow you madr jim and seb the parents

I love how fragile Sherlock is despite him being the alpha

One paragraph in and I was hooked. This is going to be absolutely fantastic!

No! I was worried that John's father would be Moriarty after I heard his name was Jim/James! He can't be John's father! John's too nice and Moriarty's too evil!

ok, what? How is Sherlock supposed to be a virgin and never kissed anyone before John when in your first chapter you established both that Sherlock had several mating announcements, each with a broken bond two weeks later, AND that a bond could only be established during intercourse?

While I like the story so far (chapter 4), I really don't like that you've either forgotten the premise you started with, or just ignored it. It took me completely out of the story, just at the time I should be rooting for the two of them and happy they are starting a life together. As an author, you have to remember that the rules inside your world have to make sense and be consistent.

That plot twist was hilarious. And amazingly surprising. Great job. Also I was thinking about why exactly you don't want to continue this story with the TBB version and I decided to argue why there should be a sequel to this awesome story.

Point one: Jim and Seb. You could totally make the evil Jim the omega's (can't remember her name and I don't want to look back) brother instead of John's father. As well as Seb didn't actually die but went into hiding for whatever reason, maybe even staged the accident.

Point two: Feels fall. you could still make it all feelsy without the whole 'John doesn't know Sherlock lived'. It could be that John's pregnant and Sherlock's forced to leave to take down the evil bastard we all know and love. That in itself can be pretty feelsy if you play it right.

I don't know... these are just ideas that I randomly came up with on the spot. Whether you want to fiddle with them or not is totally up to you. And I must say this again: Great story. I loved reading it.

Oh shit best story ever jim johns father? Amazing I love how it played out

Best. Plot. Twist. EVER.

I'm a little confused at the end. Why was Sherlock so shocked about John's dad's name being Sebastian?

Oh... wow...!
What a twisted Universe...
Jim Moriarty and Sebastian Moran as John's (and Harry's) parents...

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This fic is BEYOND Enjoyable !

TOTALLY FANTASTICALLY WONDERFULLY AWESOME !

Fic of Omega verse where I can enjoy both Sherlock/John & John/Sherlock fair fully !

I FREAKING LOVE IT !

WHAT WHY HOW WHAT WHY HOW WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. That is... continue screaming? Yes, I think I'll have to. WHYYYYYY? How... I can't... No. Not okay. NOT OKAY. But still, brilliant ending to the damn fic XD Absolutely brilliant fic, and damn, this ending is SOOO not okay, but also fucking BRILLIANT. *shakes head* Damn XD

Sebastian Moran and him moriarty as John and Harry's parents? Odd, but I kind of like it