I’m not even sure how many times I have read this story now. But the ending still makes me cry like a baby. It’s beautiful and the way that Mai and Naru’s love story is portrayed and how there growth through late adolescence and adulthood is amazing. Your an amazing author. Keep up the brilliant work.

Hey I don’t really do this but I thought it was too important. First off I want to say I love your story. It’s one of my favs to read when I’m low but I feel I must bring this up. In this chapter you use the word spastic to describe Luella, and while I know it can be used to mean excitable in America, here in the UK it is extremely offensive and does not have the same meaning. I just thought You should know.

Anyway keep up the good work.
Dream XX

Ive read this story probably a dozen times. Its brilliant. Any time i think of a GH fic its this one. It gives the whole range of emotions. Despite time passing & my different perspective i have on life the story always hit me in a new way every time i read it. Thank you.

je crois que c'est l'histoire la mieux écrite que j'ai jamais lu de toute ma vie ( du mois pour l'instant )
j'ai trop aimée cette histoire
en espèrent que ils y'en aient d'autre

I LOVE THIS! Like it actually made me cry for the ending. I TRULY didn’t want it to end. I also loved the fact about how Naru and Mia passed. I absolutely love the ending you have created. This is the 8th time I have read this. If you could creator could you possibly make another?

Adorable

It's wonderful story I read. It touch my heart. Especially the ending, really touch my heart and I cry. Love this.

*throws hands up in the air* FINALLY!? GOD FREAKING HALLELUJAH!?

This was absolutely breathtaking! You did a phenomenal job on this story

As much as I cried my eyes out reading this ending, it really was well written. I hate that they died young. But I love that the reader nows how they continue to love each other after they die and we also get to see how much love they had left in the living world between their kids and friends. Thanks so much for writing a great story. I’m glad Naru and Mai’s kids got to know about their great love story.

I think I was just stabbed a million times over. I fucking sobbed and sobbed and I couldn’t stop sobbing. I honestly can barely take stories like these I’m a very sensitive and emotional person by nature when I’m alone. My heart hurts so much. Stories don’t have to end like this it’s honestly satisfying just if they are holding their new bundle of joy and taking on a new challenge with an extra chapter about the challenges with raising a child. But I understand especially with a Naru x Mai fanfiction. Honestly those can be so difficult to write for for an ending. You want to keep it going on forever. I didn’t want my dad to see me crying because I’m staying at his place and I just curled up in the bathtub reading the final parts and sobbing with the water running. Now my best online friend was like ‘stay away from those fanfictions you know those aren’t good for you!’ I have this bad habit of reading sad stuff on accident sobbing and then rereading until I can’t sob anymore. Honestly in stories like these with characters like them, it honestly hurts to read stuff like this. It’s practically like watching someone or imagining someone close to you dying. But that you can barely comprehend but with this when those characters die. You feel like someone just called you that your mother died or something.

The ending was kinda heartbreaking. I freaking loved this whole story and I so don't know how I only just happened upon it but I am so glad I did even if years later though. Enormous thank you for this!

I ended up with tears and snots all over myself from crying, this story was gorgeous and very beautiful; well done, I read this in like 2 days? Seriously, it was so interesting!

oh god. honestly I've read this fic a few times now and goddamn the ending gets me every time. not even kidding like full on snotty sobbing. love it and love you

I'm literally crying. I loved this work so much and I'm so happy that I stumbled upon it last night. Thank you for all the time you put into this story. It is greatly appreciated.