aw cute. But ending is so rushed, you should have continued a little bit more. Not the lemon, but maybe continuing telling us how Cloud feels about Zack.

It was good! Q_Q

Interesting... I liked it, especially how Zack was the one to initiate things at the end.

Always great to see more from you! It's been a while since you released something that didn't involve vampires *shivers*.

Supreme Distraction is best distraction?

I said it before and I said it again: I'm hot and bothered overe here!
Two thumbs way up for the effort alone! d(o_od)