Awesome! I know it’s a long shot... but I’m looking forward to the next chapter!

Wonderful work!

Really interesting concept, very unique

Next chapter! Next chapter! I'm dying over here! (lol)

Hmmmm...
I'm gonna have to think on this one some more...

It's kind of awesome to read familiar scenes from the book from Jakes perspective. He's pretty in-character, but at the same time he fits your story. I've always wondered about how he thought but just retelling the original story from his perspective probably wouldn't be interesting enough.

I like your story please do not stop I like the way you tie before the books with the books.

Love it! Write more! Can't wait for the next UD! Wildhorses1492

I'm so intrigued by this story. The fact that you revisit a lot of the original plot (at least for now) makes it fun to read, mostly because I feel like I'm getting a PS refresher course. This chapter was so sad! Especially when Maxine told Jake Sam had already left... Can't wait for more.

Alright, so this is, as you are well aware, quite fantastic. I literally feel their energies spilling from the page. Sam is just so enthusiastic and of course, Jake sees that as "pest-y" and it's perfect.

Your description of Digger's personality is also a highlight of the chapter.

OMG OMG OMG I LOVE YOU

*breathes* Seriously. Seriously. I am so jealous that I did not think of this myself. It makes so much flipping sense. It doesn't even come across as a sci-fi or spiritualist kind of way, but this is coming from the chick that writes odd medical fics featuring some kind of latent mental linkage between Sam and Jake. So if you were going for mystic, I applaud, and if you were going for realism, I applaud. I think you hit a good mark between the two.

Also, your voice for Mac is way better than mine. He's a hard one to write, so mad props for doing that well. He's so verbal that is should be easy, but as we know, it isn't.

I have no idea what's going on, but I have to say, I really dig the premise of a kid!fic prologue more than I thought I would. I'm no good at writing kids, no matter the fact of how much time I spend with kids, so this is intriguing to me on a stylistic level as well as the actual storyline. I'm going to hit next with much excitement.

I'm so excited! Is Jake gonna get stuck in Blackie? Will Sam find out about his gift? I don't know! Update soon!

Hmmm... I can't wait! the suspense is killing me! UD!

This is too cute! Sam is so adorable! Matching Blacks! How sweet can you get?