The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all of the elements related to the reader like "(y/n)" and replace them with any canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed like Archive Of Our Own or deviantART.

And I like this fanfic

I'm pretty sure this it's how I'd be on the show,

Awesome start! Update soon!

I love your take that it's filmed and not animated I've never seen anyone take that approach

please continue the story soon:) the suspense is killing me

Keep writing please

Keep writing, it's great so far

Please update!nnnn

Awesome! More! More!

It's a cute story so far but you should reconsider posting it here. I love to read xreader story's but they are against FF's rules so before you get reported i would suggest removing it and maybe post it on deviantArt instead. Love, Leo

I. NEED. MORE!

Cool.:)

Love it :) please update soon

Interesting fic can't wait to read more