This is single handedly THE best! Navia fanfiction I've read and I've read a LOT! So keep up the good work I'm sure you'll do great in college cua!

I LOVED this fanfiction!

thats it i am out .

Juvia is way too OOC , i am really not liking this Juvia ,also she is nowhere near as strong as gray or enough to scare Erza . hope its just this chapter , if not i am out .

Use of Words: 10.25/10
Plot: 10.25/10
Story Flow: 10.25/10

Overall: 10.25/10

One of the best NaVia fics and deffo my fave... there was just something missing and that's why I can't give it 10.50

I ship Gruvia and Wentsu.

Me eyes will turn red, that's totally awesome! They turn red anyway whenever I start kicking somebody's ass but I bet this will be different!

If you're gonna make a cult make it a Ceasar cult!

I'm not afraid of Juvia.

I could just cry! It's so beautiful ! Best Navia fanfic I've read so far!

Awwwww I almost cried on their very sweet chemistry... I never expected that Natsu and Juvia the two uhmm... (slight rival?) would end up together having 4 kids! Aww I loved it and please I suggested you to make more please?

Omggggggg this is so beautiful! I love it

Laxus and Mirajane, matchmaker extraordinaires!

love the story

tThat was a fun story. Seriously digging the Navia tales needs to be more. I never rated Lucy much as a character and get sick of the Nalus out there. Found her annoying. Keep up the good work and Cheers!