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   catspats31 chapter 1 . 4/7/2019 While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines: "Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference." Remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like Archive Of Our Own. |
| Grace chapter 1 . 4/15/2016 I just finished Awakening and I married Lon'qu. This This makes me very happy. I loved it. 3 |
| foxesarecool chapter 1 . 6/13/2015 This was great! It may sound slightly creepy but I keep re-reading it. It's really good! Keep up the work-I'd love to read more like this. |
| NerdfighterDFTBA chapter 1 . 6/8/2015 I usally dont read alot of smut, but this is well written! I like seeing the dominate side of Lon'qu. Smut stories with Lon'qu are better than others in my opion, because he isnt as confident as the other males. Anyway, great job! I wouldnt mind more! |
| res chapter 1 . 2/15/2015 wow, you captured their personalities perfectly! so cute, too. love it |
| Serena chapter 1 . 7/7/2014 I am so late with the review but i have already read your story a few times :D I love it when LQ is so agressive and this lemon is so HAWT I will never understand why 50 shades of grey is soooo successfull i didnt buy the book just looked inside cause my friend told me the writing style is really bad and she was right Just look at all the great lemon writes here on fanfic you all should be successfull you know how to write AMAZING! |
| yuyane chapter 1 . 6/12/2014 Wow. I'm definitely not disappointed. This was a great a lemon, definitely. Loved it! |
| Haruka chapter 1 . 6/3/2014 I CHECK U OUT!DEFINITLY! Thank you LUV U 4 writing this wonderful story XDDDD! That's gonna be my number one LXR Story XDDD THANK YOUU! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2014 pretty hot stuff, i enjoyed :) can't wait to read more from you |
| Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 6/3/2014 Oooh, delightful lemon. Quite good IMO, hope you write more! |
| someoneintheshadow456 chapter 1 . 6/3/2014 Well done... 0_o I've read your other fic as well, but I personally think this was an improvement... |
| heyheyheyhollywood chapter 1 . 6/1/2014 Hot, hot, hot! I married Lon'qu so I love this (dirty, dirty, dirty, sexy) couple. Who knew he could be such way?! |
| The Amazing Blue Fox chapter 1 . 6/1/2014 ...Beautiful, makes me wonder how the cyber will look in the other fanfics. |
