You have a weak Naruto. He should be very fast. Kiba from dxd would not be able to keep up with his speed. In his base form. Not sage mode or 9 tails cloak.

thats Naru?

Great job please continue

Great story please continue it I hoped that you would not give up on it.

PLEASE tell me you'll be picking this story up at some point again.

And everyone forgot about the gunshot wound that Naruto received... Seriously?

I really hope you don't have Naruto being so weak in later chapters, especially since this seems to be around the time of the Kate summit at the very earliest so he should be much stronger. As for pairings I don't care much who else you add but I really want to see Sona with Naruto. She is so rarely used in favour of her sister or rias and her peerage and I think she has alot of potential without automatically adding Naruto to her peerage

uh...this is very interesting...please update this soon

more please

I wonder what piece Naruto would be good as I mean sadly once Xenovia joins there's only one available piece left and that's Rias' other Rook. Kiba and Xenovia are Knights, Gasper Vladi, and Asia Argento are Bishops, Akeno's the Queen, and Koneko is her only Rook, and Issei took up all 8 of her pawns.

I've read a few good crossovers for this branch and one I'd actually love to see is one in which Naruto, who is Kushina's son still(Kushina is in fact related to a Gremory), is born with Albion's Sacred Gear instead of Vali. Just think Kyubi tries to attack Naruto and Albion is Dividing Kurama's power and making it his own making it easier for Minato to seal him into Naruto and Kushina is still alive. Serafall Leviathan shows up having sensed Albion's power we have a couple options here option one Kushina's dead and Serafall revives her as a pawn, with the mission to watch over Albion's host or option B she takes them both to the Underworld Naruto learns to harness Albion's power as well as his Chakra and the Kyubi's and he returns when he's 12/13 to become a shinobi. The events of HS DXD happen 2 years after Shippuden.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story

This is a little bit, hmmm, I don't know how to put it. Different sounds right.

Different from other stories like this.

Ha sido un poco dificil de leer, porque no es mi idioma natal, pero me parece bien elaborado. Usted tiene que actualizar ya! Porque este fic me ha dejado intrigado. Es realmente complicado encontrar crossovers buenos y que ademas no se desvien tanto de la realidad de sus propios tramas, he leido muchos fics durante todos estos años y realmente hasta ahora no habia podido encontrar uno que valiera tanto la pena de seguir, lo felicito.
Espero que usted no demore tanto en actualizar su historia.

Not bad can't wait to see it evolve