it's a pity you decided to rewite this, it's brilliant

Despite the graphic transformation after death, the first few chapters of this hold a certain charm over the start of the re-write, and other points I wish had got to be explored more (Megatron actually trusting that an Autobot would come help! maybe this time a message -perhaps sent when Harry was dying in the last chapters, maybe later- that a sparkling is in danger so the Autobots pull out all the stops? or will that scorpion make it to them first and cause aid or havoc for Megatron?) , I'm glad you kept this older version version up too (an enjoyable read and imagination jump point lol).
While the bones of the stories are pretty similar, they feel like completely different stories.
Don't get me wrong, I'm really enjoying the rewrite. I'm just glad I still get to read this one too
Thank you for sharing both with us!

Autobot scum?! Lol

Thanks for the update about the rewrite. I will move onto that one and add it to my follow list :)

This has been interesting...sucks that Harry does not seem to have much capability built-in.

Nice prologue! I'm surprised you didn't include it in the rewrite - it's good.

PleasePleasePleasePlease-Pleeeeease finish this story! It's so good, I'm in love with it. It would be very interesting to see what would happen next! 33 love your story3 :D

Good to know about the rewrite.

I've liked the story so far... But I feel like you have a completly wrong category and maybe even rating for the story.

First in my opinion the category for the story up till now fits Angst with hurt/comfort. It's a complete false advertisement for the story so far, you're leading a bit into the family part with Megatron but barely.

And secondly the rating while still okay on teen is bordering on mature with what is basically a child first being killed, transformed with a hint of body horror, and then being tortured while having an intensely traumatising situation.

I would at least consider removing "adventure" from this one. And I just realised that you've got a rewrite going on that I'll check out soon.

There's a rewrite?! Sweet! I'm all over that!

thanks for telling me

Ignore the jackasses who demand things reviews are supposed to be for constructive criticism and I'm saying this as constructively as possible

Thank you for the notification! :)

Yay!
I"m really glad you aren't giving up on this. As far as I can tell, its the only one of its kind. I'm really anxiously excited to see where you take it from here. Thanks!

That wasn't me, was it?! I just hate being confused (thought not as much as I absolutely HATE asshole Authors who write amazing stories only to abandon them (likely for shits and giggles), leaving me (and their other Readers) grossly disappointed, frustrated, anguished and not to mention furious. You, of course, are a much better person since you started a Rewrite) and I was very confused since the story abruptly started at an alternate beginning and it didn't even seem to be a Flashback. Hence I was very confused, frustrated and even a little angry since it made no sense to me. You fixed the problem by separating the new story from the old, putting the new one in a separate fanfiction story base (or whatever you want to call it).