Hey great chapter please post again soon.

I need an update! This chater was so cute. I loved the movie and the minute I got out I knew I need to find a fic for diaval/oc. Haha anywho! Love this and hope you keep it up.

Aww this chapter made me melt x3

This was a good chapter, gotta say the last part was my favorite.

*_* i want longer chapters! This has been very short, but very intense. Good luck writing )

This is a awesome story I just love it! Its like Shrek & Donkey's. Talia as Shrek the mean don't need anyone girl while Diavel is donkey the annoying Wont shut up animal.
I can't wait for some juicy romance UPDATE SOON PLEASE! ;)

Ok that was exciting but what happens when they get to the castle?

I loved this chapter! I love Diaval so much! She annoys me sometimes but I'm starting to come around. I can sorta understand her feelings about all this but I think she should think her decisions through more cautiously and not judge Diaval so much. I really love this story though! :)

Awesome chapter. I love the ending. It was so sweet. Please post again soon. Enjoy your time zone. Keep on writing.

Awesome chapter! And hey, I like cliché! Lol, the story is excellent. Can't wait for the new chapter!

This was a great, long chapter to read! I liked the action, the suspense, and the consistency of elaborate detail throughout that makes your writing so easy to follow and visualize. Plot-wise, I'm kind of hoping that Diaval has a larger incentive/motivation for staying with Talia than simply waiting for her forgiveness. Sooner or later, I'd expect Talia to decide that holding a grudge just isn't worth it and finally gives in and forgives him. By then, Diaval could stay with her by choice because she was starting to grow on him and he can take her to the Moors to offer her a new home and a fresh start. Just a suggestion.

As for the review incentive, I think you should update at your own speed, regardless of how many reviews you get. I don't think it's fair to your readers to hold the next chapter over our heads until a certain number is reached. Support is support, and readers show it simply by reading chapter to chapter. Popularity for a story is great, but it should never exceed the motivation of entertainment. You have my support, as well as everyone who follows and favorites your stories, but please don't quantify it. Thank you.

That was absolutely amazing! I usually don't like long dialogues that much, but this chapter kept me interested until the end. You did a great job. :) Keep up the good work! I look forward to the next part.

This was the first story in this section I have read, and it's really good! Update soon!

Awesome, please continue! So cute!

loved the chapter, I wouldn't be able to have them talk in such a way, like in the old times so well done, its great.
Please update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter.