Reviews for These Battle Scars |
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acetwolf94 chapter 11 . 8/8/2017 I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
X Blue Eyed Demon X chapter 11 . 8/15/2016 Love it! |
mistressgreyback chapter 10 . 8/12/2016 Just an FYI, that's not Second Person P.O.V. That's Third Person written in the Present Tense. Second Person is this: You walked into the garage, smiling at Dom and Letty as they got into the Dodge. Third Person is She/He. First Person is I. You might want to make sure you're using the right terminology so people don't get confused. |
Hero Dean chapter 10 . 8/8/2016 Are u going to update this story |
Stridsyxa chapter 10 . 7/23/2016 The full quote is "The blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb." Means that the relationships you choose can be stronger than the ones you're born with. |
X Blue Eyed Demon X chapter 9 . 3/31/2016 love it! |
ptl4ever419 chapter 9 . 3/20/2016 Loved it :D |
ptl4ever419 chapter 8 . 2/22/2016 Love it, but kinda disappointed that Btisn didn't notice Meredith or that her presence didn't change anything yet. |
FLSweet82 chapter 7 . 1/13/2016 Great story cant wait for more |
TwilightWorshipper14 chapter 7 . 1/10/2016 Are they gonna have sex? Will you write them having sex? I don't know if I can sit through that. Tell me, when is the sex scene? You will be writing one, won't you? |
wolfwarrior75 chapter 1 . 11/7/2015 New chapter not showing as posted. |
angiescott3822 chapter 6 . 10/25/2015 MORE MORE MORE |
TwilightWorshipper14 chapter 5 . 10/19/2015 Seriously? Wow, does Vince even know that she took Dom to their beach spot? Wow. This is what happens when...damn. I can't even finish my sentence. |
Rumbling Frenzy chapter 6 . 10/15/2015 um, this is the same as chapter five. . . |
ptl4ever419 chapter 4 . 10/14/2015 Very curious how this is gonna go. |