Reviews for These Battle Scars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just an FYI, that's not Second Person P.O.V. That's Third Person written in the Present Tense. Second Person is this: You walked into the garage, smiling at Dom and Letty as they got into the Dodge. Third Person is She/He. First Person is I. You might want to make sure you're using the right terminology so people don't get confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are u going to update this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() The full quote is "The blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb." Means that the relationships you choose can be stronger than the ones you're born with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it, but kinda disappointed that Btisn didn't notice Meredith or that her presence didn't change anything yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are they gonna have sex? Will you write them having sex? I don't know if I can sit through that. Tell me, when is the sex scene? You will be writing one, won't you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() New chapter not showing as posted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE MORE MORE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously? Wow, does Vince even know that she took Dom to their beach spot? Wow. This is what happens when...damn. I can't even finish my sentence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() um, this is the same as chapter five. . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very curious how this is gonna go. |