Reviews for Naruto Uzumaki: The Orange Flash
Hinaruto008 chapter 39 . 6/18
Since the book is still in progress and not updating, I hope the writer would update it soon and give more scenarios of naruto with hinata pretty please!
Hinaruto008 chapter 37 . 6/18
Hinata deserves Naruto the most compared to other Kunoichi who's been there just because Naruto became a "hottie". Hinata's been there all along, even before Naruto became popular, so I hope as the story progresses Hinata will be the right one for Naruto. I don't remember if in this story they have considered the law of CRA to Naruto, but I'm looking forward to the ONE girl who deserves him the most and that's HINATA.
Guest chapter 44 . 5/26
when is this getting updated
Borello chapter 44 . 5/17
the story is really good. i hoped to read more chapter.
MirageSPL chapter 1 . 4/18
Main heroine is always the first that the Hero sees. Well, that's the case for mangas anyway. I hope it's the same here. I just adore NaruIno.
dr.stein98 chapter 44 . 4/1
Hope u just took a year off for writer's block and life. And that ur gonna be pumping great chapters out again
SilverSurfer24 chapter 1 . 2/22
Ah well, the 'Anti-Harem' trope is just as bad as the harem trope itself. I haven't read this story at all and I already know that it is a brutal tease that only a masochist( i mean no offense to anyone who actually likes this story, it's just my own opinion.) could enjoy. I'm honestly only here because I wanted to check what Naruto's final decision would be but it seems that this story hasn't even gone that far yet.

Honestly, while I AM kinda interested in this fic, the knowledge that all those forty chapters of character interaction are pointless kills any and all will I had for even starting this.

What's the point of reading about Naruto flirting and having sex with twenty different women when nineteen of them are going to end up heartbroken? Compared to that I'd rather read a harem fic even if it's unrealistic and cringe-worthy.
SLay KinG chapter 9 . 2/7
it's like I'm reading the "The bachelor Konoha" ... with dates and shit
SLay KinG chapter 1 . 2/7
just reading these comments pointed out my fears... if u put a harem with ppl like Ino ,sakura and Hinata fighting or competing for the affection of one man it will be unfair ... first Sakura and Naruto are on the same team so she gets alot of time with him... from missions to training nd all that... Ino while forward will lose alot of fans for not letting her character grow with naruto coz it will be like she's just following him for his looks ,Hinata has a lot of fans and I'm one of em I'm mostly a temari fan but Hinata is a very close second but anyways back to my point Hinata fans will lose interest if u don't give her enough screen time to and develop her relationship with Naruto,then we get hanabi I don't know if u made her older here but she is 4 to 5 years older then naruto which is kinda pedo if u ask me and I hear she gets the most screen time then wats the point of u keeping on playing with the characters because at the end of the day him choosing Ino would be to far fetched,him choosing Hinata over hanabi would just be to unrealistic if he has a stronger connection with her but I haven't read it yet just checking the reviews and commenting from wat others have said... but I'll push through for at least 5 chapters and see how that goes
Makaze125 chapter 44 . 1/21
awesome chapter can't wait for the next
Amargi'sNodachi chapter 13 . 8/11/2019
That was ridiculous. Kakashi letting Sasuke stay way. So utterly ridiculous.
HyperspaceGamer chapter 2 . 3/8/2019
Even though I’d never heard of the (Age/2)7 rule before, I’d had a good idea what it meant, and google did not disappoint. The “aw, phooey” was absolutely perfect, lmao.
Richard1081 chapter 44 . 1/25/2019
Update some time soon please
Jasmine Julia Soleo Bias chapter 3 . 1/14/2019
im sorry. i like how naruto turned out but i dont think this is my type of story to read. good plot though!
yomi chapter 12 . 12/9/2018
wtf dude, why cant i read chapter 8 or 13? i just get a blank page with links to the anime manga page and the naruto fandom page? fanfiction seriously pisses me off sometimes
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