Reviews for Kyuubi's pride
AkashiReiko30 chapter 1 . 9/19
i'm sure that mufasa die early 'couse of heart attack. oo
crazy dragon ninja chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
this is awesome! ill have to check if someone adopts this! good job! w
Esparia chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
Never seen such an interesting crossover...i think I like it.
TheEasternWolf475 chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
thank you JAR, for your review. and i will try and make more paragraphs in my next stories. as for the spelling mistakes, i try and correct the most possible, but english is not my main language so a few tend to slip by. and also go ahead and continue it if you like. (I will MAYBE, do something similar to this but with a cool/powerful naruto sometime in the future)
anyways, this is QCGhostWarrior, over and out!
JAR chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
I might actually adopt this, sadly however I am currently in progress with my own fan fiction so it might be awhile before I come back to this.
But anyway I like the idea of your story and some advice, you might want to try to avoid writing your story in huge paragraphs like that. And there are also some grammar mistakes you made.

Anyway good luck on your other Fics, and hope you improve on your writing skills.