I like the story but it had more chapters
When will you update them

A well done story. This was quite the different take on the legend of Hades and Persephone. Nicely done with explaining the birth of Persephone and how she rules her domains with the loving support of her family. Quite interesting to read how she was portrayed as she stood up against Cronos as well as being able to see the good and bad in humans. Going to Hades side showed his character quite well with his taking care of the harvest and the mortals he met. Looking at previous reviews shows this story was completed and wonder if this story is jut being edtited. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

What happened to the other 19 chapters? Did your story get taken down? Or are ya just editing it and reuploading it? I really like this sorry for how unique the premise was!

Lovely, well done indeed.

What a treat this story has been! Lovely prose, characters and a very interesting twist to this myth. Much praise to your work!

wow this gave me a weird feeling i guess im so used too dark hades instead of light hades but good story

Thank you so much! XD
I can't believe that I was one of the reviewers you acknowledge for your great motivation. That was so sweet that you included my name. Thanks so much, that was really sweet! XD
On another note, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I can't believe that it's finished! TmT
I'm just crying now... I mean, it was a really sweet ending but it just doesn't feel like it's finished!
Okay, I'll do this in order: the good parts!
I was crying! It was so sweet! XD - The marriage was such a sweet occasion for everyone (especially for Agalea & Hephaestus) I love how they weren't so bitter and enjoyed their marriage ceremony in the end. It was a really good foreshadowing of the love Persephone and Hades would find later on in the chapter. I especially loved what you did for Hera! She wasn't a bitch! She was actually sweet and happy for her son! Usually, in other fanfics, she's very bitter as she focuses on her own problems and woes (who could blame her?) and she ruins everyone's day b/c of her bad mood, but it was nice to see a different side to her. I love reading her thoughts about her son's happiness and her new daughter - in - law. I actually saw her as an affectionate mother and the goddess of marriage, actually performing her duties! So that was really sweet.
Okay, so Persephone and Hades - their reunion was AMAZING! They are so meant for each other. Hades, his sense of humor, it was so cute to read! He really loves her! And the shock that Persephone felt, she was literally frozen! XD - It was nice to see her relax. It was nice seeing these lovers just love each other again. You were so graphic on the naughty parts, I loved it! And you bringing up their flower! THAT scene with the rose! Again, I was like "awwwwww." I feel like that rose flower, withering and blooming again and again, perfectly represented them. It's like no matter how long they're away from each other, or if they have an argument, their love always comes back stronger. I really love that visual metaphor. And that scene where Persephone was like an innocent, little girl when she saw that butterfly... it was great! She really is fascinated with Hades' upper world with the mortals too. Everything just felt so goooood! I felt that it ended quickly, though. I mean, I wanted to see the interaction between Hades and Cerberus. Like his initial reaction and Cerberus's initial reaction with him. How will the other inhabitants of the Underworld react to Persephone's decision of Hades? Or to Hades himself? How will Demeter react?Will they approve? Or, will Hades have to prove himself? Will he have to learn new things (whether on his own or from the others) in order to be a good king who can support Persephone? Would this Hades judge souls too? Will he let Persephone continue to be the main, absolute ruler (you know, with how everyone values a patriarch rule back then). Also, when Hades goes back up for six months will Persephone go to? For a visit or something? (Since she really liked that humble, warm lifestyle Hades enjoys living). And will Hades and Persephone receive an official formal wedding ceremony too? In the underworld or the mortal world? I would love to see how you would do that. I know that this is the end, but it feels like their love is gonna go through a whole other journey now. Especially since they found a way to compromise. I wanted to see what other obstacles they'll face together, and how they'll get through it. Like, I didn't know that this Persephone could give birth to children. Or Hades, facing the Titans and other evils in the underworld with Persephone. And their children growing up and facing their own journey. Seriously, that fun facts section you showed us was like a good preview/outline to a Book 2! I'm sad that it's over b/c it gave me so much comfort and it was exciting and poetic to read, but I'm glad it was a story that helped you the most! I'm glad that you had fun reading these story, and then was inspired to write your own! That truly is magic. I hope that your now feeling better and enjoying life and even more stories, and I hope you'll come back again with even more stories! Thanks for the great chapters and finishing this story! I'm glad I read the ending (even though I'm sad it's done) Have a good evening!
Sincerely,
Renee Swan.

Hey Tanya, first of all, great finish! You are one amazing person and I hope you'll keep writing and flourishing!
I'm also really happy for you. Seeing all those great reviews on your story and how ppl loved it 3
Thank you. I'm really honoured that you mentioned me although I did nothing much and was mostly being pathetic.
Love,
TWIK

I hope you update soon. I wasn't sure about the role reversal but I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story.

I've been trying to find this fanfic for months.

It is easier to get used to the twists more than you think

That was brilliant writing! The description and the povs of a third party! That was excellent plotting. Good job. And well...where is hades!?

Such a beautiful way to describe winter, yin have a really brilliant talent for describing scenes and people so vividly! I can't wait for the last chapter!

Where is he indeed? Love the update and I can't wait for the next one. Hopefully the next update will be a bit quicker because I can't wait to see where you are going to take this!

update !