Hello, I finished your story in a day, and I'm moving on to the sequel but I can't help to notice that you didn't update anything after chapter 5 and you changed story to Demons. I'm sure both stories are just as good, but I hope you can continue the sequel?
This fanfiction was really good and your OC characters are well done.
Thank you for writing x

To bad you didn't say in that this story as an over powered OC in the description, I would have known to skip it

It's an amazing story. I'm sure it's going to be great then.

Thank you for letting us know.

Phew, finally got to the end. Wow amazing twist with Ollie using the Mirakuru on himself, it was awesome. I shall move on to the sequel in due course.

A pilot named Mr. Jordan... Hmmm. Doth my eyes deceive me? Also I'm back on track with this story. I tend to take breaks due to its length. :P

With this chapter, you've written a good ending for this story, a story I've enjoyed reading and it was a good way to pass the time "Arrow" wise as we wait for season 3. Thanks for granting most of my requests, such as having Malcolm and Nyssa fight, bringing in the Huntress, revealing her and Starling's status within this chapter, having Nyssa and Talia fight, and whatever else you decided to give me. And thanks for the "Valkyrie synopsis. ARGUS sure can act stupid. They should know better than to try apprehending lethal fighters at airports. You said you'd reveal the characters futures within this chapter, but you didn't mention what happened to Talia and Malcolm. If Talia was injured and slipped into unconsciousness, why didn't Nyssa arrest her? And how come Viper didn't try to kill her since Ra's ordered it? And when Talia awoke, how did she slip away and where's she going? And where'd Malcolm go? You didn't say if he remained part of Team Arrow, left town like within the "Arrow" series, or try to find Thea. And what is Malcolm doing? Please tell me Thea left a note for Roy before she departed. How did my idea regarding Viper and Malcolm taking Thea away get better since Malcolm didn't accompany the two women? Were you referencing Ra's appearance within season 3 when Viper mentioned his possible arrival? I'll be reading "Valkyrie" and you have a good day.

Can't wait for Valkyrie. Personally, I wish there were more Thea-centric stories, so knowing she will have a big part in the next one makes me happy. Though I am confused- did Malcolm get away, was he let go, or was he captured and is being held for Thea to kill?

finally, the epilogue!

wow, that was a lot of stuff to cover! must be weird for oliver, to be a hero. oh, and detective lance's mistaken little discovery... oops!

and a sneak peek, too? man!

you know how to wrap up a story but keep people wanting more!

Ok one OMG I CANT WAIT!
And two talia is still alive?

I see you decided to post this chapter instead of delaying it. You did a very good job with this chapter and it was very epic. Good way to end this story. I wasn't expecting Oliver to inject himself with mirakuru. That came out of nowhere. When you reveal what happens to each character within the following chapter, please don't forget to mention the Huntress. Please also mention the level of damage to Starling City. You had the conclusion involving the Markov Devise go both ways. The devise was activated but didn't cause an earthquake because it was deactivated. Malcolm has truly repented and now has two more things in his favor. He saved Nyssa's life and shut down the Markov devise. Ra's should really pardon him now after those two deeds. Please have Nyssa stress to both Ra's and especially Thea that Malcolm shut off the Markov Devise before Thea goes terminator on him. And please let Nyssa have overheard the final part Malcolm said to Talia which Thea missed and tell it to her. Thea needs to know the truth before jumping to conclusions. I have another idea. Thea listens to Nyssa's words, but still isn't willing to accept Malcolm as her dad. However, after hearing what Nyssa says, Thea decides to accept a truce with Malcolm within a trial basis but makes clear that she will take him down if he hasn't truly repented. Please consider it. Good job with this story and "City Of Blood" airs tomorrow. Have a good day.

two points to viper for thinking ahead! and bonus point for snarking oliver and malcolm!

one huge OH #(*$%&! for thea catching malcolm distracting talia by telling her what she wants to hear about his evil plans for oliver and thea... but not the truth.
oh, wait. double OH (#*$&% for her deciding that becoming an assassin and whacking her dad is a good idea.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUGH!

bonus HOLY #(*$&% moment for oliver to throw himself between slade and felicity and get killed.
and for felicity to save him... that was totally awesome!

these chapters are long? well, they go fast enough!

good fighting scenes, but i'm getting a bad feeling about what's coming up...

Things are really messy right now in that the Starling City residents are rioting and Slade's soldiers are assaulting the city simultaneously. I wonder what will happen to Helena after the battle is over. Will she be returned to police custody, transferred to ARGUS custody, join the Suicide Squad, pardoned since she helped save the city, or go into hiding? If Oliver didn't have the cure, I think it would be reasonable for him to kill. There's such a thing as war and self defense, and I think Tommy's ghost would understand. This has been an enjoyable summer read as I wait for "Arrow" season 3 and thank you for writing it. However, I have a request for you. I usually look forward to updates, but please don't post the final chapters for this story until season 3 commences. I consider this story a good summer filler as I wait and I'd like my appetizer to be stretched until October please. Perhaps the next chapter could be a cliffhanger. I also have another request involving Thea, Viper, and Malcolm, but I'll send it to you in a PM if you decide to send me one. Have a very good day.

I wasn't expecting a battle this soon, and things are really starting to heat up. I was going to ask you how Nyssa and Viper were able to kill the mirakuru enhanced men, but after reading this chapter a second time, I understand how they accomplished that. They shot arrows into their skull and snapped their necks. Makes sense to me. It looks like Thea and Viper are developing a sister like relationship. I think it would have been reasonable for Oliver to kill in this situation if he didn't have the cure. After all, this is a war, and secondly, there's such a thing as self defense. I think Tommy's spirit would understand. I'm going to read the next chapter shortly so see you then.