it's super cool how you reimagined this - I never thought about Ron being the one with the diary, but you wrote it so well!

Love this story thanks for sharing your writing

I absolutely love your writing and how you deviate from canon so well! loved the twist with Ginny toocan't wait to read the rest of the series!

Interesting interesting. I love the changes from canon!

It's Arthur, I'm sure, since he'd been ImperiusedI haven't forgotten THAT detail! Also I am glad that my idea as to how Gilderoy plays into everything, was right. I am glad to see Ginny getting more active participation than being a victim, although I feel sorry for Ron. He's not a bad kid, just (frankly) underwhelming considering everyone around him.

Ok wow! Love it getting better and better! Your stories are wonderful so far! Can’t wait to read the third one! Xox

Oh wow, is Ron the one affected in this? Acting weird is worrisome...
And good if Draco to grab the shoes... But damn it's curious that windows still are enough of a barrier from the eyes of the basilisk

Hahaha oh Snape, thank goodness for your protego. I keep forgetting HP wasn't the savior character in this and therefore isn't a horcrux either. I'm excited to see where this goes

Oooh I wonder if she'll end up a cat again in here! And excited to see where this goes

Jeez, it's already started :( ...we'll have to see how this plays out

Yikes, he shouldn't have done that...I'm amused Lily didn't berate him further but everyone likely didn't want to be around him

Yikesss, we know Arthur was imperiused...I wonder if it's still Ginny in this realm...she has been MIA

Ohh, quite a few distinctions, and I rather like the pacing of this all. Soap bubbles gives it a nice little irony. Great job!

Wow, so I take it the barrier isn't known for sealing itself even to Padfoot and Lily...I wonder who sealed it...Death Eaters vs Dobby or someone else entirely

Ooooh, is that Peter!? That's a twist if I ever saw one!