This was a cruek ending. Getting Luke to use him like that. I hope to see the rest of their relationship blossom and if you are still doing this, the seven's reaction to Luke.

COOL STORY BRO!

Loved it! Can't wait for the prequel!

Great chapter loved it

If Poseidon was Percy's father,it WOULD explain his ability to split the earth and create storms because Poseidon is also the god of earthquakes and father of storms, technically Percy would just be more powerful than other sons of ,I just felt this needed to be said

Yay! I love it when fanfictions I love continue!

Great chapter please update soon

Question. Will you be continuing this? As in, your version of the second book and so on? If not then alright. But can I just say I am loving it and can't wait for more! :) Sarajevo

Great chapter I loved it please update soon

Wow.
Let's just say that I haven't seen anything quite like this on fan-fiction. It's just like the original, except the writing style is very different and there small tweaks to the plot here and there that you know are going to have a major impact to the story later on.
Really interested to see where your planning to take this.

This is just like the book, but I think what makes it cool is that the pace is a lot faster and of course, there's pesky Luke/kronos.

I am sensing dark!Percy, and idk why. Oh well.

Looking forward to the next update! :D

This is a nice start. I'm excited to see where this goes.