You really had me going there for a bit! Nice twist!

lol. I really thought he was gonna die such a random death.

XD thats funny

lol... nice one

Oh my gosh!SUPA NINJA TURTLES BROS!

wow. Lol

This is confusing are they playing a video game?

Are they playing a video game and b y accident Leo hits Donnie to the floor and he dies?

Then Mickey comes in after using the bathroom asking what happened?

IS THAT WHAT HAPPENED?!

XD

Hahahahahaha! Funny!

Haha! Oh my gosh, that was great! X'D I'm not a huge fan of TMNT, but I found you randomly and clicked on this story out of curiosity. HA! XD I had a feeling it was just a video game. Go, Donnie, go! Get revenge on your brother for taking your first life! Hey, two's not a lot to go on. If Leo does it again (and again), Donatello won't be so lucky. O.o Really funny short little story! Nice job!

LOL

*sigh* I thought he was dead

Oi ello mate!That was SO funny ROFL! I'm just laughing SO hard! Donnie: What its not that fun when you die! Me: Well at least I'm a mutant Cat so I got nine lives plus extra since I'm half human Ha! Hey Roxy have you read Ally or Enemy? If not you should totally look at it I think you'll like it! Its more than likely on the fifth page on here. If you are a Raphael fan you SHOULD look it up! I'm just sending out little flier things to everyone on fan fiction to read some stories that haven't been getting enough reviews or if the Author needs more supporters I'd love it if you would take a little time to look for it enjoy. Its currently on hiatus but will be updated soon! Thank you so much for writing this One shot I needed a good laugh :D Thanks, Shades Shadow P.S If you need to find a profile I can give you the account names of some people who have some cool profiles that doesn't give out unwanted information keep me posted if you want some tips or ideas I'm glad to help Thank you, Shadow

Hahahaha! Really?

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL jajajjajajajajaj que divertido XDDDDDDD