WHY LINK IS DEAD NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

this was great and sad but i really didn't like the part of her not reuniting with the original link-Shadow.

NO! WHY AM I CRYING! WHAT THE FUDGE IS THIS MAGIC YOU PUT ON ME!

Ahahahahahahahahahahahha T-O

Ps. I just finished the game AGAIN today, and all the feels are coming back... so maybe that's why I'm crying...

Aw fuck you man i legit almost cried

Maybe you could make a new fanfic were link from twilight Princess doesn't die
This story is so sad!

;-; waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhwawawaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa it so saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad *gasps for air* waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawawaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawawawawaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

Anyways good job

Just missed some commas in this tear jerker

*cries*

So beautiful and sad! And also sad. And even more sad. I love this though, great story.

I have read this a MILLION TIMES and I still cry my eyes out! ;_;

new Wii U LOZ game looks epic. I cried :'( so sad I love your stories though!

This makes a perfect one-shot, but a multi-chapter of this would've been great too! w

THIS STORY IS SOOOOOOOOOOOO SAD! WWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYY?!

I had wished for a moment in Hyrule Warriors like this, except without it being sad, so much. Midna was seeing another reincarnation of Link for crying out loud! Don't you think she would've gotten a little emotional or said, "Nice to see you again." ? That said, this story was really good and sad. It made me very sympathetic of Midna. :(

-Y’know, I’m tempted to ask why the ruler of a people is leading from the frontlines, but…well, this is ‘The Legend of Zelda.’ I suppose there’s a precedent for that kind of thing. ;)

-First section, fight scene is good, but Midna comes off as far too chatty. Yes, she’s inclined to gloat, but it just feels forced here. Also, that she talks to herself when the creatures retreat…why? You can get away with this in a visual medium, but in novel form, thought or narrative is usually the way to go.

-"Nice scarf, you should have worn that when we were together, it suits you well. It wouldn't have been very practical when you transformed into a wolf but hey, fashion before everything else right?"

The imp teased.

(Keep “the imp teased” as part of the same line.)

-Writing up to this is a bit rushed. Though granted, I will concede it kind of goes with the fast-paced (or what I assume to be fast-paced, haven’t played HW) nature of the game.

-Okay, moving down…okay, I’ll give it a net positive. Mainly due to the concept behind it, that time is basically an SOB in the setting (yes, Shiek puts it much better in OoT). That, and it’s something I haven’t seen before, of a different incarnation of Link meeting someone who knew a previous incarnation. Okay, there’s Ganondorf in ‘Wind Waker’, but it’s a different angle here, and it works. Midna’s a bit temperamental in the scene, but I guess it kind of works out here.

Decent job overall.