Will we be seeing some cute submissive Leo too? He’s such an adorable, nerdy dork. I love him.

I know it's been almost two years since you wrote this, but this is really good. Please continue it.

I liked this chapter a lot, and I can't wait for the next chapter, please update as soon as you can thanks. :)

Great chapter! I like knowing that Leo has a "hideaway" spot that he can go to when things get rough - and the bit about the old movies was a great touch!

Good job! :D

My day just got a whole lot better with this update. My heart really tightened when Leo pulled Raph closer. It was so sweet a moment...

Finally a new chapter! Yay! :) I really liked it. The tension, the hesitance, the insecureness, it was all there. My only point of criticism is that there was a bit of head-hopping going on. It made it hard for me to understand from whose perspective that last part was written. Was it Raph? Was it Leo? I think it's Leo, but it wasn't clear to me. Aside from that, the portrayal of Raph was perfect as ever. Thanks for updating!

Oh my gosh I'm in love with how innocent this is! They are so frail when it comes to romance it's so cute! I have a feeling that things will be heating up once they kiss tho (;

So cute! I loved it! I almost thought that Leo and Raph were gonna kiss each other...Almost...It's like Leo wanted to do it and Raph was waiting for the first move from his big brother...I like them so much...they are the best! even in a romantic way! I loved it!

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *clears throat* Excuse me. XD Its good to see you back! And here I was thinking you gave this life up! Once again, you've sucked me back into this story with the feels. And Leo's good taste in movies. XD Hope to see more from you soon! Stay awesome, and I will see YOU... in the next chapter. Bye-bye!

So...did you mean to just stop like that? Right in the middle?

I mean, I don't support ANY kind of incest - and I really hate people messing up my turtles with their Leo/Raph, Raph/Mikey, Mikey/Don, Don/Leo fantasies - but this is a good story.

Hi! I just came to say I LOVE your Leo and Raph fanfic! It's a guilty pleasure for sure ;p I can't wait to see what you do with chapter 7 (and hope you are doing ok)!

Wow
Just— wow.
This story is so amazing, and I'm not even kidding.
I do ship turtle-cest so hard and I've read a lot of different fan fictions about Leo and Raph (being them my favorites ehe~) and I have to say that your story is different. Is different because, you know, generally when one of the two confesses to the other, the other one always loves him back and that is just... wrong, from a certain point of view— if you consider what we are talking about here; instead, you are giving us a new perspective about the whole thing, and it's different in a good way, of course.
Leoardo doesn't just hate Raphael for what he's confessed, nor does he just love him back casually: he tries instead to really understand his vision in that, his position, and doesn't want to abandon his brother to deal with his feelings alone; and Raphael tries to finally come to terms with his so-hated-feelings for his brother in a way that is so accurate, both of them are sticking to their characters and omg just— *slow clapping* good job.
PLEASE CONTINUE OKAY JUST, DON'T LEAVE ME—US LIKE THAT, PLEASE.
I look forward to receiving a mail saying that you updated because, really, I need more of this story in my life.

Perfect doesn't even start to describe how great this story is, really.
Update soon, please (part 1837828262)

I love the way you are presenting this relationship! It's sooo good!
Your doing a great job or staying true to the characters, of how they would react and what they would probably say when placed in this kind of situation. I appreciate it so much that your making them take their time to talk about this kind of relationship and what they want/if they want it. It's just so wonderful!
I'll try and think of some more constructive feedback for my review on my next chapter, as it seems for now all I can do it gush!
Keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading what happens next!

Happy you and this story are back! I can't wait for Leo's answer!

Update soon!

Great job on the chapter please update as soon as you can thanks.