Reviews for Cracking Gaps: Sins of a Family
yuutojaden chapter 16 . 10/8/2019
please continue
Pootsoup chapter 16 . 9/30/2019
I feel like the seal on them was put there by Jiraiya, I mean he is pretty obsessed with the "Prophecy" in most fictions, so why not here?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
Hinashit
AnkoUzumaki chapter 16 . 7/7/2019
Story was alright, didn't care that half of the chapters were what happened last chapter
Kingkong101 chapter 6 . 6/12/2019
Lame
Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 16 . 5/30/2019
Pls make more!
Namittheking chapter 3 . 10/23/2018
naruto's younger siblings are 5 years younger than him. so they are not even 8 years old yet and you are saying that one of them is a playboy. also, in the first chapter minato said he would teach them the rasengan. they were 3 years old at that time. even for ninjas both those things are ridiculous
Xhine chapter 16 . 10/23/2018
This is quite impressed and i am not easy to impress.
Tempest-Rage chapter 3 . 10/15/2018
hmmm, why Naruto is the same class with his younger twin? is not there an age difference like 5 years?
Tempest-Rage chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
hmmm, i dont know why Rasengan always thought to be one of the most easy jutsu in Naruto? cmoon what age are they? 5?6?7?8? and you thought them to be taught rasengan... pffft, in canon Naruto have a hax skill, and I am not so sure here his sibling will have that hax
Aza Niel chapter 1 . 10/4/2018
umm, how old is naruto exactly when he goes to the academy? he is supposed to be 5 years older than the twins right?
sd74 chapter 16 . 9/28/2018
Nice having bystanders besides the participants to watch the prelims.
sd74 chapter 14 . 9/28/2018
Wait, what?... Life are full of surprises and the unknown
Guest chapter 16 . 9/26/2018
Awesome story and the update is super duper.
sd74 chapter 10 . 9/28/2018
By the power vested in me as Jounin of Konohagakure; I unofficially pronounced you as man and wife.
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