Reviews for Cracking Gaps: Sins of a Family |
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yuutojaden chapter 16 . 10/8/2019 please continue |
Pootsoup chapter 16 . 9/30/2019 I feel like the seal on them was put there by Jiraiya, I mean he is pretty obsessed with the "Prophecy" in most fictions, so why not here? |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2019 Hinashit |
AnkoUzumaki chapter 16 . 7/7/2019 Story was alright, didn't care that half of the chapters were what happened last chapter |
Kingkong101 chapter 6 . 6/12/2019 Lame |
Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 16 . 5/30/2019 Pls make more! |
Namittheking chapter 3 . 10/23/2018 naruto's younger siblings are 5 years younger than him. so they are not even 8 years old yet and you are saying that one of them is a playboy. also, in the first chapter minato said he would teach them the rasengan. they were 3 years old at that time. even for ninjas both those things are ridiculous |
Xhine chapter 16 . 10/23/2018 This is quite impressed and i am not easy to impress. |
Tempest-Rage chapter 3 . 10/15/2018 hmmm, why Naruto is the same class with his younger twin? is not there an age difference like 5 years? |
Tempest-Rage chapter 1 . 10/15/2018 hmmm, i dont know why Rasengan always thought to be one of the most easy jutsu in Naruto? cmoon what age are they? 5?6?7?8? and you thought them to be taught rasengan... pffft, in canon Naruto have a hax skill, and I am not so sure here his sibling will have that hax |
Aza Niel chapter 1 . 10/4/2018 umm, how old is naruto exactly when he goes to the academy? he is supposed to be 5 years older than the twins right? |
sd74 chapter 16 . 9/28/2018 Nice having bystanders besides the participants to watch the prelims. |
sd74 chapter 14 . 9/28/2018 Wait, what?... Life are full of surprises and the unknown |
Guest chapter 16 . 9/26/2018 Awesome story and the update is super duper. |
sd74 chapter 10 . 9/28/2018 By the power vested in me as Jounin of Konohagakure; I unofficially pronounced you as man and wife. |