Well, I didn't understand the last part of the chapter but I'm sure you'll let us know soon.

It was a great chapter. I loved how Bruce once again made Waller feel defeated. But I don't believe that they are not much different: they are different because Bruce makes everything to save people and slip Waller's traps while the other does everything for power and to force her will on the others.

Once again Bruce and Clark's exchange was delightful.

Now the mystery about the almost victim of Deadshot remains to be solved - and Waller seemed sure for the failure. I wonder whether Bruce and Clark had anything to do with the failure.

Great work, dear! Take care of yourself!

So Deadshot was faking - now it makes sense. However Waller had made her precautions... she knows her 'employees' and takes care that she is worse than them. I imagine that she would want desperately to have Bruce at her service as well but he isn't for her teeth...

Nice chapter, dear!

Hi, dear!

Sorry for being so late but various things came up.

It was another great chapter! Especially, I loved the new exchange between Bruce and Superman - I never get enough of this, hehe - and I'd like to learn more about the team they mention.

Alfred with Madge was also a delight. As for Deadshot, I'd expect from him to be more collected and cool during his inprisonment preparing his next move: it seems that he isn't such a tough nut after all...

Soon, I'll read the other chapters.

How are you and your loved ones? I do hope that you're all healthy. Take good care of yourself, dear!

Hey...I'm alive! Still really enjoying this story...when I get the chance to catch up with reading it, lol. I hope you're doing well in this time of Panic and Social Distancing!
VDMA,
Sophia

That first paragraph—I’m learning how joy is a sign of healing. Not it’s constant presence, but that it can be felt at all.

...th ey had gotten some guidance from groups there interested in justice following the ends of wars, Amos had gone to join his siblings. His strength, training, and education at the hands of Waller was already helping them make more of their shared land. — And this is the ultimate redemption, when evil things are turned to good.

Three men, two in their early twenties, and one (well Lucius wouldn't tell) — that made me smile.

I think this is a lovely chapter of just desserts, and of redemption. And it was just what I needed tonight; thank you.

The walk through the other cells was incredibly effective, especially with a narrator as perceptive as Deadpool; well done. And you caught Waller's carrot-and-stick personality very, very well.

The redemption, too - to catch that hopelessness, and to see Madge living, proof that something better is possible, and to have that welcome - lovely.

Actually, rats dislike cheese compared to most other foods. They'd prefer to attack a human as opposed to going for cheese, so a doctor WOULD actually be better bait for a rat. The only reason people think rats like cheese, is because it's one of those long lasting foods you'd put into galleys and pantries they would often raid.

I love Alfred’s sense of humor—the comment about denting things was lovely.

"If you can call being cuttingly chill or sarcastic toward the poor physicians when they asked simple, necessary questions, then sure." Oh, Clark. Just that statement shows how strong your friendship is. Good line.

"You'll learn to love the new one too. You do that well." While this statement seems a bit OOC for Batman—too kind—I do like it.

Should I remember Jeanette, or have we not been introduced yet?

I liked a lot the flashback in Clark's memories and the role Bruce had in that part of his life. Well, the more you reveal about their meeting the more I want to know about...

As for Deadshot, this is a prison. One way or another, he would end up in a place like that. On the other hand the way he swears to make pay the one who is responsible for this it is ominous.

Another great chapter, dear, I'm looking forward for the next.

Take great care of yourself!

Hi, dear! Happy New Year! How are you?

A great chapter, dear. You teased us about what happened when Bruce met Clark - it is very interesting and such an appettiser for more.

I liked the interaction between Bruce and Alfred.

I think I'm looking forward to Madge's reaction inside the house. :)

The scene with Clark was good; the memory of him and Batman, incredible. I loved Bruce's well-timed "I'd do anything to hear my dad call me like that again" - coming from him, that line meant everything. And I can't wait to read the story that teaches Bruce to realise that his world needs Clark too. I loved, loved that scene.

I really liked the way the first part subtly showed the differences between Clark and the CEO's relationship that happened over the plane ride. And I'm really happy - but very nervous - about those family reunions. It is a very, very hard thing to come back to a family a different person, with a past they hadn't experienced.

And I'd comment on the second part, but that might give things away. :)

Hi, dear!

Another great chapter with the characters right on point. Your description of Bruce's beliefs and emotions are perfect - he definitely has more than enough reasons to believe all these even if nothing of these are his fault. I'm sure you refer to Ra's Al Ghul and Talia about his first connection with a woman. He implicitly admits that he has feelings about Madge.

I wish we get to know more about Bruce's meeting with Clark and those others - it was very intriguing.

Take care of yourself, dear!

So many good lines. “You know the likelihood of my judging you harder than you judge yourself is infinitesimal."

And “Bruce gave a sniff that sounded bitterer than those she often heard from Alfred.”

Or “Usually, Mr. Wayne avoids relationships like quarantined buildings.”

Also, your editing skills are great; this read very smoothly.

Nice. Now I'm curious regarding the "unredacted" story-I'm assuming something Justice League? Interesting that in this version you have him in the League (or at least a team with Superman) when he's barely established in Gotham-not, in fact, even legally back as Bruce Wayne.
VDMA,
Sophia the Scribe