omg why wasnt this continued?! this is amazing!

pLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY...i LOVE IT

Oh I love this story...there are so many possibilities...please continue it when you have the time...thank you

This is great .. Will there be more?

*gasp* Charlotte had better not ruin their moments. That kiss when Charles was in a foul mood ohh "It made me shiver all over" GO Mrs Hughes!

Charlotte has arrived! The plot thickens! Dun dun DUN!

I like the growing intimacy you have between them. Can't wait to see where it goes next!
Thank you!

I love all the delicious moments between Charles and Elsie they certainly are moving in the right direction. Now what is this girl up to? And why is Charles behaving so strangely about her? Hmmmm... Xoxo

Poor Charles might just explode with all the tension. I sense trouble..

Ohhh god. Dammit Charlotte he was having good thoughts..chelsie thoughts! I can't wait for the next chapter..this one was so good. :)

You're setting us up very well. Charles and Elsie are already under pressure to resist each other, and now, we have someone who is going to test Charles' patience by the look of it. I'm intrigued...

Charlotte has shown up! And Charles seems less than pleased. Yikes! I smell trouble!

I have a feeling Elsie is going to meddle here and this niece may be invited despite Carson's wishes. This could go very poorly, but it will be an interesting read;)

Yea, a new story. Can't wait for the niece to show up.

That was so sweet! Thanks :-)

Ooh! A fantastic start. I'm already hooked :) xo