I'm so excited! I hope Zeff is okay.

Yessssssssssss pleaseeeeeee

Oh please do continue this.

So when I read this chapter I was a little confused at what was going on since it has been a while since the last update so I re-read that chapter. I now know why Ace is in the hospital, but who died? It was a good chapter! I didn't think Zoro's was someone fucking him then leaving, or ignoring him? Anyway, please update soon! :DD

Please continue, it's a really interesting story and I'd love to read more!

Good to see you back Gook luck and Welcome back

I do! :DD

Youre seroiusly stopping tihs here? Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo plzz nooooooooooooooo

Please write more, can't leave this sort of cliffhanger there!

okay I read it very slow, been finish. I feel their little "fight" should have been on the day when they had their "date" then in here, oh well. I like how Zoro almost destroy the well to control himself, good Zoro good! XD
god I have a feeling something bad is going to happen to Ace or Zoro again, hope it won't be too bad. I want to see them going out again

What. The. Fuck.
It cannot end there. Please update soon!

Oh no! Ace don't die! It was a good chapter! Please update soon! :DD

that was nice ch, well they kind of laugh a lot in this ch what seem a little odd but nice I guess. they didn't argue all day 0-0 wow this is achievement for them. I like their little rising...ohh and the kind off sex there, well that was have to happen too fast if you ask me but would have happen anyway after some time.
wow Zoro really say a lot after their fuck up, I like his words but I think...well maybe to split the speech instead of it coming all together, let him take a breath and then he continue. other then that, it was a good day for them XD

I kind off forget that I didn't review this ch, even after I read them long ago. so sorry about it, I will start now. the first think with the sex talk, Sanji telling Nami he had sex with...Zoro? 0-0 I"m confused here, when that happen? did they had sex? where ? when? why?...what?
other then that I like what Zoro said in the meeting, it was very wise words for life that hard to do then said. and what the guru said to Sanji was also nice. so that the part I like most in this ch, cause they hitting right in your gut.

I just started reading this story yesterday and already I like what I read, so I really really hopes that there'll be more of it soon. It's different and it's catching and I want more of it! XD

Love & Hugs

Crystalbluefox