Reviews for Hope's Second Rising |
---|
OoohACat chapter 12 . 7/4 This was what you could call a hauntingly beautiful story. I almost skipped through it when I was scrolling through stories to read, but I’m ever so glad I didn’t. One of the best stories I have read. Thanks |
NightFyl chapter 8 . 5/26 That’s pretty much what I listen to, now that I think about it |
kanukaianderson123 chapter 2 . 4/24 Shots fired? Beginning of the chapter sounde like call out or some shit. |
NightFyl chapter 11 . 3/19 I keep picturing hope as a like fourteen-year-ild |
PrincessMagic chapter 12 . 1/18 wow! wow wow wow! i absolutely loved this and sad that she didnt get to see Wanda and Pietro before she died! |
Silvertikal chapter 12 . 12/11/2019 This was my first self-insert fic to read. It's interesting how you did it, though I can't fault your method. Yay for being a pokemon fan, that made me happy. I'm not as familiar with the X-men's comics or stories beyond the movies (newest ones nonwithstanding esp since I know this fic was written prior to AoU) so it's always a bit different trying to figure that out. I do wonder why Hope's healing abilities stopped, though. Is it because of what she was stabbed with? |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/17/2019 Thank you for not just stopping |
Guest chapter 12 . 5/12/2019 Ah I see more dues ex machine to end this with the surprise sentinel/emotions ruin my powers bs author fiat. What a bad story |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/12/2019 Stupid angst is stupid |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/12/2019 You do have a choice. You’re too powerful and know too much about shield for them to own you. It’s just author fiat |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/12/2019 Why are they so concerned? Sure it’s gross but she literally can’t die and they are government agents... totally OOC for spies. Author fiat to get her in ‘trouble’ |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/12/2019 Fury and I had a complex relationship with little-to-no-trust between us. Without Fury, without SHIELD, I would be no-one with not even a penny to my name and would probably still be under Duerr's hands and owned almost everything I claimed as my own—they basically owned me too. Yeah that’s BS and you know it. You can go to the X-men, you can go to stark, you can go to the media. More author fiat to make plot go this bizarre direction out of actual reason |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/12/2019 HYDRA doesn’t have the firepower to take the X-amen without dropping a few thousand pound bombs, which would be too noticeable. More author fiat hand waving |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/12/2019 Just author fiat. Shield wouldn’t dare give or take an enhanced to professor x, you just wanted a BS reason to have the plot go there. Her not talking about hydra is just more author fiat because you can’t invent a plot other than the canon mcu so you’re letting stations of canon go as normal. Another bad SI |
Raphaim chapter 8 . 4/2/2019 in this chapter you kept using owe instead of own |