"You boldly went where no goblin has ever gone before." Oh dear god I can’t stop laughing! And AGAIN the cuteness between Ava and horned king... that made me cry with suck happiness

“Perhaps you would like a second round of your punishment this afternoon?” oh gosh the look on Ava’s face.. I can only imagine XD Getting tickled by the Horned King I doubt was on her list of things she’d expect! But still I love it to death.

Oh I wish I had found this story long ago! I love it. Their relationship is to die for. Please know if you ever want reviews or anything like that, I will send them aaalllll!

I just realised the invisibles are literally us. Every time a cute moment comes up between the HK and Avalina you KNOW we’re all silently screeching “PROGRESSSSS!” in our minds. So yes. The invisibles are one hundred percent the readers of this story XD

Every time he tickles her... that’s the cutest thing I ever have read XD just... picture... her trying her luck at tickling him O.O The revenge he would have would not be desirable at all... yet it would still be utterly hilarious.

Don't worry, I was gone from my stories for 3 years too! But I came back and mostly everyone was still there, waiting for me! We waited for you, too. :)

I'm back reading again! I wonder when was the last time somebody besides me read this... Hello?! Can anyone hear me?! Well at any rate, I've always enjoyed reading this story ( probably the reason I keep avoiding reading it on a normal basis. I don't want to meet the day I have none more to read! '( ). Though I must say that with all of the character growth there's always been something nagging me. Why is Avalina still so afraid? She's gone through so much, and we know she's got tons of courage deep down, so why can't she get some more backbone? She's friends with dragons, goblins, and ex-evil kings, has faced near death experiences numerous times, and still trembles with fear at the task of simply ask for water! COME ON AVALINA! Have some confidence in yourself!

Work Horse?

I’m Happy that You are Back. I’ve Missed this story & am looking forward to future chapters.

Here, Maybe I could be of Help to inspire You with Future chapters. Have You ever thought of creating a copy of this story for the “Archive of our own” Website?

I think that if this story got more exposure & Reviews from new viewers it could help Out with inspiration & Motivation.

By the Way Have You checked out YouTube Videos of gameplay of Disney’s Tsum Tsum Game & Disney’s Sorcerer’s Arena Game? The Horned King Has made it onto those Games as both a Boss & Playable Character. Go Check those games out, You Might get inspired By them.

I've read this story three times, and the results were...….. I LOVE THIS STORY #1 STORY I LOVE THE HORNED KING TOO! NICE JOB CacklingCactus!

I hope you update soon 3

I hope with all my heart that you can continue this story, I discovered it about a week ago and it was a way to get away from all the bad thoughts I had, thank you very much.

BEST CHAPTER EVER! I LOVE IT!

I love your story! I read it over and over again, but I always discover something. And then, your story is captivating! Moving too! How many times have I wanted to cry, or laugh. At first, I was struggling, since I didn't know the Horned King, but after ... really, you write very well, the descriptions are complete, you can feel the emotions. For the Horned King, he is perfect. The idea of departure (he leaves the cauldron and he has a limited time to find love) is well thought out. In this story, he is scary and funny, touching. Really, I thought I was going to cry when I saw her transformation, her suffering in the cauldron. And his master is a real one (censored insults) ! You respected the basic character of the Horned King, but you gave him a chance to become better. The friendship between Avalina and the Horned King is very beautiful, more beautiful than a romance! For the rest, Creeper is good, more developed than in the film, I love Avalina's horse, and the invisible ones are funny! Here it is, I think I have said it all. I don't know if a next chapter is planned, but don't hesitate! Your story is one of the most beautiful that I have read, it is a beautiful lesson in love! Good work !

this is the best chapter in the whole story! when I read it I couldn't stop laughing! the Invisibles are the funniest creatures on the planet Earth! The Horned King's gonna murder them for sure! This is so funny I don't think I know anyone who'll do that to him especially throwing a pie in his face!