Now, all we need is to know what Roddick looks like...

Nicely done, a few spelling errors but obviously better than the last. Glad to see you're continuing this and maybe the next time can have some interaction between Roddick and Nana. But anyway, keep up the good work.

Can you make a God Eater 2 story, cause this is interesting.

Grammar and spelling needs a bit of work. Could have been more detailed, but it's better than most by a long shot. Felt and looked a bit rushed, but over all, not too shabby. Very good in fact. Good move is all I can say.